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Whish Says Breeze

uncanny half-moon whish says breeze ~ eerie night owl hoots tu-whit, tu-whoo May 6,2022 Nature Haiku Poetry Contest Theme: Whispers Of The Wind Sponsor: Sotto Poet Syllables (5-7-5) checked by HMS.com SECOND PLACE Bite-size Poem 43 Poetry Contest sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 5/12/2022 12:19:00 PM

Wonderful imagery on your winning entry in the contest. I can hear the owl "hoots"... :)Paulette

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/12/2022 11:25:00 AM

So clever and playful Mala! Love the onomatopoeia in the word "whish" as you blend it with the night sounds of the owl. Congratulations dear friend! This is a unique and creative haiku gem! Blessings!

Jo Chamberlain

Date: 5/11/2022 6:26:00 AM

I like your Haiku very original. Congratulations in your placement.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/11/2022 7:22:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna. This is my best gift - your comment - so glad you found it original.

Valsa George

Date: 5/10/2022 9:04:00 PM

There is something unique about your haiku with the bird sound . Love it ..... Congratulations on your win. I forgot to enter my haiku ....! Sad it has happened many a time before

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/11/2022 7:21:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. I am so sorry you forgot to enter. Yours would be a sure win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2022 7:26:00 PM

love the way you did the sounds for this KU. Congrats

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/11/2022 7:20:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Glad you enjoyed.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/10/2022 7:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely Haiku write. Have a blessed day.............

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/10/2022 4:10:00 PM

Thanks, Paula. Love writing haikus.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/10/2022 7:00:00 AM

"uncanny" - Wow! Heavy adjective. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/10/2022 4:08:00 PM

Thanks, Christuraj. Glad you enjoyed.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/10/2022 6:04:00 AM

Malabika, Congratulations on your winning placement in my Haiku contest. You wrote an excellent Haiku. Also, thank you for taking part. I much appreciate it.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/10/2022 6:35:00 AM

Thank you for the placement. I feel honoured.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/6/2022 6:37:00 PM

Love this! Clever!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/6/2022 4:26:00 PM

Hello Mla, this beautifully done. Friendship & Love , Darlene.