Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Haiku

Whish Says Breeze

uncanny half-moon
                             whish says breeze ~ eerie night owl 
                                    hoots tu-whit, tu-whoo



                                         May 6,2022
                             Nature Haiku Poetry Contest
                           Theme: Whispers Of The Wind
                                   Sponsor: Sotto Poet
                      Syllables (5-7-5) checked by HMS.com
                                      SECOND PLACE
                          Bite-size Poem 43 Poetry Contest
                                sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Paulette Calasibetta May 12, 2022 at 12:19 PM Wonderful imagery on your winning entry in the contest. I can hear the owl "hoots"... :)Paulette

Sam Kauffman May 12, 2022 at 11:25 AM So clever and playful Mala! Love the onomatopoeia in the word "whish" as you blend it with the night sounds of the owl. Congratulations dear friend! This is a unique and creative haiku gem! Blessings!

Jo Chamberlain May 11, 2022 at 6:26 AM I like your Haiku very original. Congratulations in your placement. Malabika Ray Choudhury May 11, 2022 at 7:22 AM Thank you, Joanna. This is my best gift - your comment - so glad you found it original.

Valsa George May 10, 2022 at 9:04 PM There is something unique about your haiku with the bird sound . Love it ..... Congratulations on your win. I forgot to enter my haiku ....! Sad it has happened many a time before Malabika Ray Choudhury May 11, 2022 at 7:21 AM Thank you, Valsa. I am so sorry you forgot to enter. Yours would be a sure win!

Andrea Dietrich May 10, 2022 at 7:26 PM love the way you did the sounds for this KU. Congrats Malabika Ray Choudhury May 11, 2022 at 7:20 AM Thanks, Andrea. Glad you enjoyed.

Paula Goldsmith May 10, 2022 at 7:01 AM Congratulations on your win. A lovely Haiku write. Have a blessed day............. Malabika Ray Choudhury May 10, 2022 at 4:10 PM Thanks, Paula. Love writing haikus.

Christuraj Alex May 10, 2022 at 7:00 AM "uncanny" - Wow! Heavy adjective. Beautiful. Congratulations! Malabika Ray Choudhury May 10, 2022 at 4:08 PM Thanks, Christuraj. Glad you enjoyed.

Sotto Poet May 10, 2022 at 6:04 AM Malabika, Congratulations on your winning placement in my Haiku contest. You wrote an excellent Haiku. Also, thank you for taking part. I much appreciate it. Malabika Ray Choudhury May 10, 2022 at 6:35 AM Thank you for the placement. I feel honoured.

Kim Rodrigues May 6, 2022 at 6:37 PM Love this! Clever!

Darlene De Beaulieu May 6, 2022 at 4:26 PM Hello Mla, this beautifully done. Friendship & Love , Darlene.