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One Jackdaw Birding: Vanishing Whip-Poor-Wills

 

 

Whip-Poor-Will Entertains

The whip-poor-will entertains. His song crisp and fresh today His voice is not inhumane. And leads my few thoughts astray. Running was the Bovidae Outside my open window. So, I could hear faraway Dance of the painted pinto.
Just for fun, no there was no Bovidae nor painted pinto. Written: 5/18/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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George Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 6:26 AM
A lovely and delightful poem and image. Enjoyed both .....!
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 6:33 AM
Thanks for the uplifting review of my work. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara
Daniel Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 9:33 PM
Sweet one, Sara, congratulations:)
Kendrick Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 4:46 AM
Thank you, Joanna. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara
Poet Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 9:23 AM
Back with congratulations on your well-deserved win with this delightful poem, dear Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 12:36 PM
Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara
Canerdy Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Delightful poem, Sara--made me smile! Janice
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Thank you, Janice. Glad you could smile, and I hope it lightened your day. Sara
Y. Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 7:11 AM
Hi Sara, You penned a good poem on "The whip-poor-will." Well done. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great weekend;-) Alexis
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 12:28 PM
Thank you, Alexis for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Kaufman Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations Sara..such lovely imagery in your work. Enjoyed immensely.
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 12:09 PM
Thank you, Nancy. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara
Alex Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 2:20 AM
In fact, I was reflecting loud till I found your note below. Beautiful work. Congratulations!
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 2:42 AM
Thank you for dropping by with congratulations. Just keep reflecting and let the imagination run wild. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 1:11 AM
Still makes for a fun poem.
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 2:43 AM
Thank you, Victor. It was fun. Sara
Poet Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 8:14 PM
When you allow your mind to wander, it soars like a bird or a butterfly. Enjoyed your poem, Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 2:44 AM
At times it does soar. Your visits encourage. Sara
Rose  Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 4:05 PM
I love the way you let your imagination soar like the wings of a bird and a butterfly. You had me convinced you were there Sara, well done. Bless your beautiful heart xo
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 2:46 AM
The whip-poor-will comes each morning around 6 A.M. and sing me a few songs then about 7 A.M. the dove starts cooing and the whip-poor-will quits for the day. Thank you for the compliment. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 3:48 PM
I enjoyed your little poem this day.
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 2:47 AM
Thank you, Andrea. A visit from you was delightful. Sara
Andresen Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 11:35 AM
- Lovely written, Sara ... high amperage is expensive today :))) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 1:39 PM
Ahh!! for sure electricity cost $$$, but the whip-poor-will's song is free. Thanks for the visit. Sara
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