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Whip-Lashed Doggy-Tail

Never had a feeling like this ever felt so degrading back and forth with mind and heart continuously racing bumping side-to-side along the walls just grating against with skin and pain eminating from flesh, becoming bare the eye can see what looks to be painful as if a bundle of hooks tearing apart and away the body to pieces though still going back still moving on this love has in it something terribly wrong Why must one endure such agonizing pain how can one keep going back knowing what this love contains whip-lashed over and over again and again crawling back towards this love this love is a doggy-tail wagging between it's legs

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Date: 1/3/2011 5:31:00 AM
What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Dominic. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/3/2011 4:05:00 AM
Very creative and interesting write on whip lashed doggy-tail, Dominic
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