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Whining Words of Wonder

“Whining words only heard through the ears of whiners” Quote by: No Name, Me Cry baby-cry baby no ear to hear your words traveling through empty winds of silence whining, why do you whine with these silent words no one heard let the fowl fly with these words chirping and singing. What causes this your ungratefulness of this life bitterness with anger not having possession, you have blocked out the sun all that is left is strife, while others listen and compare with a question Asking these words unmentioned-why are you greedy, you have birth just as us how much more do you wish Promises are never given who is needy, work is how you receive you have become selfish. I ask these things and wonder why-are you whining lack of life all have but only you are greedy taking away your hopes and joy without smiling think of those without a dime with faces dreamy Cry baby-cry baby no ear to hear your words what causes this your ungratefulness of this life asking these words unmentioned-why are you greedy I ask these things and wonder why-are you whining Contest: My Created Form Sponsored By: Constance La France Date Created: 11/29/2020 "Quote has 12 Syllables"

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Date: 12/15/2020 4:08:00 PM
Bobby, congratulations on your win in my Created Form- Rhyme4-Mix Contest with this wonderful poem, I like your quote too _Constance
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Date: 12/13/2020 10:10:00 PM
Bobby, love your verse. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/13/2020 3:23:00 PM
Hi Bobby, How did I miss this? I liked the overall message in your write. Congratulations on your win my friend. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/29/2020 7:49:00 PM
Utterly awesome message, Bobby... I love your rhyme scheme. Nice work, fun to read. I haven't looked at Constance's Comp yet, but I guess you made up the quote.... It's really clever!!
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