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Whilst Dead Sunflowers Floated

I woke in a sweat, was it a dream A heron and a girl near a stream Whilst dead sunflowers floated My mind drug induced coated Have my thoughts reached their extreme

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 3/24/2011 6:49:00 AM

Yeow! Don't like those dreams that wake us up in a sweat...sometimes I try to fall back asleep to finish them....dummy me. Would want a happy ending, where the flowers became water lilies. Nicely done, James! Best to you and yours, Mikki

Jack Horne

Date: 3/22/2011 1:11:00 PM

LOL - love it : ) Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2011 11:34:00 PM

Hey, James. I see you did the Montage contest. I don't have a clue on this one, but I enjyed where you took it. How are you doing lately? Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/19/2011 6:18:00 PM

Gee, James, Barbara G. just posted a limerick about a flower in a dream too. I must be missing a contest. Really enjoyed this write! Spent the whole day fishing and getting sunburnt. Had a blast at the pier. Men there thought they could "teach" me to fish. Shame on them! I showed them a thing or two. Love you, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/19/2011 4:49:00 PM

Nice interpretation of the picture nicely worded, James

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/19/2011 3:28:00 PM

Food from your thoughts here James, enjoyed today thank you for posting this!