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While You Are Away

w h i l e y o u a r e a w a y my heart starts to f a d e forgetting what heart beats and blood is for to sustain and and my memory does not play for you are the imprinted punctures of a code that I must feel with my hand cause while your are away I see well cannot that and if any particle of you remains a r t b e g i n s t o s e w h e y l m l cause whatever warmth is left I stay up longer held. while you are away my heart begins to lack all the times of composure want less to interact and I and I would just lay away I am not that strong while while you are away...

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Date: 8/17/2010 6:41:00 AM
Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already Jessica. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2010 6:46:00 AM
Many congratulations Jessica on your win in Carol's fine contest with this well thought out artwork >> James
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Date: 8/5/2010 6:25:00 PM
very clever Jessical. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:21:00 PM
Congrats on this well deserved win, Jessica
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations Jessica on your worthy of winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:26:00 PM
Congrats Jessica on your winning poem in Carol's contest with this unique and exquisite write .. luv it... enjoy another momentous victory my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Jessica. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2010 12:22:00 AM
The creativity alone is amazing. Somehow it is hard for me to imagine to submerge myself so deeply into the realm of literal ingenuity. Amazing poem.
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Date: 8/3/2010 12:07:00 AM
Jessica, true emotions I knOw exactly how U fEEl.~SKAT
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