While the Wild Wind Whistled

Seeking solitude, through glass doors I ventured into the forest. 
Led by a path of thickened brush. 
At winter's end, temp' sixty strong, it made for a pleasant stroll, enhanced by the whistles of the mild wind   
Captivated by the walls of flower and green scenery whilst inside, I stood motionless
With the leaves blowing in rhythm, and the whistling singing 
"Like a candle in the wind" ... 
I tilt my nog' to the earth beneath my feet
While standing on stone; I thought 
I noticed it was a headstone with faded and dulled letters 
"Mose and Mary- 1884" it read; I trust 
With a chilled spine- I wondered...
Was it them, who whistled me here to their home 
I sat for hours celebrating with them,
In rhythm with the leaves
While the wild wind whistled 
"Their Anniversary" 
I assumed

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Date: 2/23/2023 12:28:00 PM
Both haunting and enchanting. I enjoyed reading this Charlie :-)
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Date: 1/22/2023 4:53:00 AM
Hi Charlie. In many horror films walking through a forest is synonymous with fear and not always clearly defined. Much is based on suggestion, anticipation of what might happen. There are elements of this in your work and I love the whole mystery aspect. Your poem started out with an appreciation of nature and took a sudden spooky turn which I loved when reading. The ending, celebrating in harmony with nature was really satisfactory and neat. Just some of my thoughts that your poem sparked in me. Big thumbs up! :) Cheers - Gary
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Date: 1/21/2023 7:04:00 AM
Wow, Charlie, I was sure surprised by the ending of your stroll! I loved the story and possibilities that you portray in your marvelous write! Excellent read!! Happy Saturday !!
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Date: 1/19/2023 12:44:00 PM
Oh, this is excellent. Your words bring peace too. Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 1/19/2023 5:45:00 AM
A lovely whistling story, Charlie:)
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Date: 1/19/2023 5:04:00 AM
I like the turn in your poem about Mose and Mary, Charlie--splendidly done with great images that capture the reader.
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Date: 1/19/2023 12:10:00 AM
Enjoyed your stroll in the forest Charlie, it holds many secrets. Tom
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Date: 1/18/2023 11:10:00 PM
Such a heart-felt poem attracted by the demise of two lovers.
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Date: 1/18/2023 2:35:00 PM
They have had many anniversaries Charlie, l wonder if you will be invited back next year. An intriguing poem. Enjoyed !
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Date: 1/18/2023 1:09:00 PM
Something about seeing a grave stone and one unexpected at that. Good people respect the lives that were. When I visited the Paris catacombs it was surreal. I could have touched the bones but sanity kept me from doing so. So many bodies. Glad you gave thought to this couple.Hopefully they were a happy one :)
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Date: 1/18/2023 11:28:00 AM
Love this Charlie what a tale. Love your theme and if it was true what a remarkable happening. This one's a favorite.
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