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While taking it in

WHILE TAKING IT IN. While taking it in, It is quite unlikely Like me While taking it in, An unsaid force pushes frame Into a pit of no fame While taking it in, A misframe of said things That are unsaid While taking it in, Peace of a headpiece All forgone!, All on a mind forge. While taking it in, I pit against mispity And all its siblings of spite Oh! While I was taking it in, I was on a verge of the chief'sValley Its kinetic is pulling at my bare soul Years on years of taking it in All these, oh! While taking it in My mind's heart is full All these while taking it in, A peaceful moment of still annoyance A chaos of joy But no more! No taking it in! All must be out! Out of the system! My system! Lest, i develop a heightened red stream pressure flow! Which is the a great fear of an ancient age My oral porosity shall not leak in drops All in retaliation But shall it flow like a stream you say? Aye! It shall! Good riddance!

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Date: 1/29/2024 12:41:00 AM
It reflects how one can endure no more when push to a limit. An ideal thought for the patient folk
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