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While taking it in

WHILE TAKING IT IN.


While taking it in, 
It is quite unlikely
Like me

While taking it in, 
An unsaid force pushes frame
Into a pit of no fame

While taking it in,
A misframe of said things 
That are unsaid

While taking it in, 
Peace of a headpiece 
All forgone!, All on a mind forge. 

While taking it in, 
I pit against mispity
And all its siblings of spite


Oh! While I was taking it in, 
I was on a verge of the chief'sValley 
Its kinetic is pulling at my bare soul

Years on years of taking it in 
All these, oh! While taking it in
My mind's heart is full

All these while taking it in, 
A peaceful moment of still annoyance 
A chaos of joy 

But no more! 
No taking it in! 
All must be out! 

Out of the system! 
My system! 
Lest, i develop a heightened red stream pressure flow! 

Which is the a great fear of an ancient age
My oral porosity shall not leak in drops
All in retaliation 

But shall it flow like a stream you say? 
Aye! It shall! 
Good riddance! 


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Date: 1/29/2024 12:41:00 AM
It reflects how one can endure no more when push to a limit. An ideal thought for the patient folk
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