While My Storm Rages By

And softly again rises the raged storm
In the fields of wheat and rye
There is no home for butterflies 
But a falcon winds by
When the swings and the baby’s cradle
Rocks with lost lullabies’
Dimmed and dimmed the luminous light 
Candles and lanterns wane in the night
Amongst hundreds if not thousands days of light
Sleeps one darkened night.
 Whilst after the storm there is not much to gather
Nor to fret, but  much to mourn with all populace dead
 There in the pastures
One lost lamb of the thousands
Runs the distance in search of home.
And a river winds  in two
to trod a million ways 
with the fishes untroubled
by the storm of the land
The cotton from the plants move so 
 With the wind on its wayward path
As my storm rages by
all farmlands in black and blue 
 in moments past turns to dust.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/9/2017 10:28:00 PM
Very deep and powerful, and very unusual, with layers like an onion ... congrats on your win, Sitabz!
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Date: 11/18/2017 1:35:00 PM
Thank you so much .
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