While I Was Dreaming

While I was dreaming
I saw life flash bye
my meandering mind.

It took me to an
iridescent transfiguration,
circumference squared ---

distributed through the radius.
What is this journey through time?
Illusions misted

by realities transcendence
into a utopian scheme.
Rapid fire dilemmas 

pester serendipity
like a fine tuned piano
as the composer conducts

mingling of senses
into rhapsodic creativity.
How do you examine

this miracle of existence
when crevices and potholes
pester the daily grind?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Soul Avatar
August 15, 2017 at 10:08 AM
eloquently written,got my mind racin'
Swartz Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 7:56 PM
I like this piece. The last stanza is perfect. Great poem.
Capitano Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 1:44 PM
Spacious in its scope, this poem hits all the right marks. Very cool.
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