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While I Was Dreaming

While I was dreaming I saw life flash bye my meandering mind. It took me to an iridescent transfiguration, circumference squared --- distributed through the radius. What is this journey through time? Illusions misted by realities transcendence into a utopian scheme. Rapid fire dilemmas pester serendipity like a fine tuned piano as the composer conducts mingling of senses into rhapsodic creativity. How do you examine this miracle of existence when crevices and potholes pester the daily grind?

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Date: 8/15/2017 10:08:00 AM
eloquently written,got my mind racin'
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Date: 8/13/2017 7:56:00 PM
I like this piece. The last stanza is perfect. Great poem.
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Date: 10/18/2016 1:44:00 PM
Spacious in its scope, this poem hits all the right marks. Very cool.
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