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Which Me Will wake

The hypnotic line between the wish and dream is drawn at some eerie mystic point where midnight meets the dawn while sleep pervades, death can be an outcome, so can birth and there is no rim betwixt the heaven and the earth. My sins and probities at this sanguine moment play, which then makes me ask which me will occupy today. And I can’t tell, for love, or hate, or something other can often turn my soul from one side to the other. If I wish it, dream it, will it be forever so?

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Date: 4/11/2025 9:41:00 PM
Your lovely poem is full of meaning and soul stirring questions, Terry. Congratulations on your win. :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/11/2025 11:05:00 PM
Thank you Evelyn
Date: 4/11/2025 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations my friend for your high placement in this poetry contest with an incisive, thought-provoking poem on the inner self.
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/11/2025 11:05:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 4/9/2025 6:53:00 AM
Interesting and insightful searching. Congratulations Terry! :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/11/2025 8:06:00 AM
Thank you Linda
Date: 4/7/2025 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your creative write. Have a blessed day with your win................
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/11/2025 8:06:00 AM
Thank you Paula
Date: 4/7/2025 11:39:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Terry :) - hugs
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/11/2025 8:06:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise
Date: 4/7/2025 8:02:00 AM
Your poem evokes a distinct sense of beauty, nuanced feelings, and imagery. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Terry
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/11/2025 8:07:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 4/1/2025 5:17:00 AM
- A deep poem, Terry... interesting to read :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/1/2025 7:40:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise
Date: 4/1/2025 3:22:00 AM
Thought provoking poem. Well done :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/1/2025 7:40:00 AM
Thank you Heidi
Date: 3/31/2025 5:02:00 PM
well worded.....wish, dream, actuality - and the possibility of good sleep......len
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/1/2025 7:40:00 AM
Thank you so much

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