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Where's Hope - Split Haiku

Without hope, what then Wander sans reason Months pass without season Vacancy sign reads What is all that knocking for No one's home any more God keeps on knocking He says it may be dark now Search for light anyhow That glimmer will spark Illuminating your mind Pain Is not all you'll find You'll find those missing seconds, minutes, days, weeks too Time still exists for you You'll survive the months with love for each new season God's hope is the reason... 3/29/16

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Susan Palli

Date: 4/18/2016 2:31:00 PM

I love these split Hikus! Great job.

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/21/2016 7:48:00 AM

Thank you Susan, how kind of you to say!

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/15/2016 9:16:00 AM

Beautiful poem particularly loved the last set of haiku. A 7 i feel. Loved always my lovely friend, bl

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/21/2016 7:31:00 AM

Such a great compliment, thank you very much BL!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2016 9:48:00 PM

Dineen, Congratulations on your "MYSTICS SPLIT HAIKU win." ~LINDA~

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/8/2016 5:19:00 PM

Your congratulations are very appreciated Linda, thank you very much!

Lin Lane

Date: 4/6/2016 3:12:00 PM

I like your theme and congratulations to you on this one, Dineen.

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/8/2016 5:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Lin, i appreciated that!

Joseph May

Date: 4/6/2016 6:12:00 AM

Glad to see this one on the winning list Dineen...Congrats

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/6/2016 7:23:00 AM

Good to know you were glad to see it Joseph, thank you.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/6/2016 2:07:00 AM

Congrats on a worthy win with these superb haikus Dineen..

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/6/2016 7:18:00 AM

What a wonderful compliment, thank you so much Dr. Sharma!

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/5/2016 7:54:00 PM

Uplifting write, Dineen. Congratulations...

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/6/2016 7:16:00 AM

Charlie, thank you for telling me so, appreciated!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2016 5:14:00 PM

Such a beautiful flow from start to finish - a lovely string of haiku congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/6/2016 7:14:00 AM

Glad to know you enjoyed in total Jan. Thank you very much!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2016 3:08:00 PM

this set is quite lovely. Some of the best split haiku I have seen in this contest!

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/4/2016 6:20:00 PM

I truly appreciate such high praise. Thank you Andrea!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 3/31/2016 12:13:00 PM

Beautiful truth, thanks for sharing...........A.M.

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 4/1/2016 11:23:00 AM

I thank you very much for saying so, Afolabi, appreciated!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2016 6:39:00 PM

Dineen, maybe one day you can teach me what a split haiku is. I enjoyed especially the last one. LINDA

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/31/2016 4:34:00 AM

Hey Linda! When I read the contest title, "Mystics Split Haikus", I thought, what is a split haiku? Intriguing...she wrote in the contest description: Split-haiku's in syllables of 5, 7, 1, 5. Figured I'd give it a try. Happy to know you enjoyed, thank you!

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 3/30/2016 6:27:00 PM

Good flow and tone of this poem.

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/31/2016 4:27:00 AM

Janis, good to know you thought so, thank you!

Joseph May

Date: 3/30/2016 12:13:00 AM

Beautifully penned Dineen...best wishes

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/30/2016 10:45:00 AM

Thank you Joseph, and I appreciate your support!