Notes About The Poem

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The embedded YouTube video was done before the rewrite below. So now you have both versions.

This link will take you to you tube where I read the poem before the re-write and you can see me live with my new haircut. I know I know. Big deal right? Right? I post on you tube under the name Armand Aleg but you only need to click or touch the link to get there.

https://youtu.be/F9aoqM31ZoA

Here I am reading a poem when I was growing my hair to donate it.

https://youtu.be/X9BEk6sqi4U

Finally here I am long hair and beard

https://youtu.be/Dzq2XxcWzPw

Listen to poem:

Where Your Eyes Shine I Want To Lie Down

where crystals gleam i want to lie where the scented lily opens reveals its stamen tender as babies breath as unavoidable as our sun's and moon's provocative union as desirable as a cooling whisper on a hot humid day as necessary as the blistering heat a dream yet to be dreamt in my wanting an explosion an us reality you are the joy of laughter boxed, wrapped, gifted all the gems of no monetary value - priceless moments absorbed fully womanhood sings and i respond in kind climb beyond frozen minds where pianos open radiate warmth cradle purity my will nestled in the notes where crystals gleam i want to lie
July 25 2016 Maurice Yvonne
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Patiole Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 9:44 PM
Love this
P  Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 5:16 PM
Such lush loveliness. A little bit sensual and a lot profound. A real gem to read.
Austin Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Caught this one again on the weekly features. Congrats on this wandering through the tender land. Love it daver
A   Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 6:48 AM
Wow, I feel as if I just walked into a breathtaking scenery. Your desires are like wind causing debris everywhere you go, * that's good tantalizing Notes ... Luv. Linda
Dietrich Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 12:32 AM
wow, ARmand. you are on TOP of the BEST POEMS list right now. Congratulations, and I hope you are doing well!
Manassian Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 2:43 AM
Lovely, dear. It was great to SEE you as well. Now I know what you look and sound like. BTW....LOVE the long hair. :) Thanks for the visit. This poem is full of beautiful dreams and romance....Lovely
Lamoureux Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Great poem. I hope this note finds you well Armand.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 2:53 AM
Wonderful seeing you reading your wonderful work and seeing your sweet mother Armand. This poem is exceptional, especially hearing you read it! ; ) 7
Roberts Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 11:12 PM
Loved it...Seren
Fleming Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 5:07 AM
Very, very lovely, Armand, in every single way...truly a really wonderful poem! My very best regards...And my warmest wishes. Your friend always. :) john
Onclaud Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 5:24 PM
blessed to have read this re-write so profound and filled with melodious lines, armand!... higgs
Onclaud Avatar
August 6, 2016 at 5:26 PM
cheers on your POTD spotlight!
Day Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Excellent work on this project! Your verse is tender and poetic. Great job! Jesse
Yvonne Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 8:51 PM
Giving it another seven!!
Yvonne Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Thanks!
Austin Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 2:32 PM
Alike a grave site idle. You becoming one with the beloved. Very tender stuff, Maurice. Good to hear from you again. Love, daver
Austin Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 2:35 PM
I do not visit YouTube or any of the other side shows, so I missed a lot of your input. Sorry. Will make up for it on my next visit. daver
Smith Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 7:36 PM
I like this. Beautiful thoughts brought the page intact. Congratulations. So many wonderful lines for me to treasure which you have given me for free. Best wishes from David in NZ
Yvonne Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 1:49 PM
You are so kind, thank you.
Kent Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 7:26 PM
Enjoy the day well deserved.
Yvonne Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 1:47 PM
Thank you!
Yvonne Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Thank you!
Allison Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 4:51 PM
Oh Armand I have a massive smile seeing you get POTD I remember being so moved when I saw the video the other week - loved it then and its even better to see it here on soup:-) hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 2:45 PM
Thank you sweetie!
Y. Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Hi Armand, This is so beautiful and well written. I'm impressed. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor. A gigantic seven:-) Alexis P.S. What video? ?
Y. Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 2:30 AM
You are most welcome. I went to your youtube page and it was a real pleasure to hear you read your poems. I saw the other videos as well:-) Alexis
Yvonne Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 2:44 PM
I had a lovely visit at your pages and explained about the video. Thank you for your kind remarks.
Bateman Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Best Congrats Armand on POTD!! Cheers, Gary
Yvonne Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 4:28 AM
It's nice to see you Gary. I have not been around much.
Trifiatis Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 8:26 AM
I just wanted to visit you and see how you are doing, mon ami Maurice! Your writing always impressive!
Yvonne Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 5:59 PM
Thank you!
Nance Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 7:08 AM
I just knew this would be poem of the day sweetheart, well done ;) another hugs xx
Yvonne Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 12:54 PM
Hugs, right back at you.
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 6:48 AM
- A beautiful poem, Armand :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Yvonne Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 12:31 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise, I always appreciate your comments. Love, Armand
Smith Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 6:35 AM
Well done Maurice, congratulations on POTD honors...
Yvonne Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Thanks Charlie!
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 1:39 AM
I absolutely ADORE this one, Armand. It's so special! Loved your video. Wish you were here all the time like in the old days!! FAVE
Yvonne Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 10:08 AM
You are such a good friend, love you armand.
May Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 9:24 PM
Very good write Armand...and a fav...best wishes...
Yvonne Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Thank you kind sir!
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