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Where Your Eyes Shine I Want To Lie Down

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The embedded YouTube video was done before the rewrite below. So now you have both versions.

This link will take you to you tube where I read the poem before the re-write and you can see me live with my new haircut. I know I know. Big deal right? Right? I post on you tube under the name Armand Aleg but you only need to click or touch the link to get there.

https://youtu.be/F9aoqM31ZoA

Here I am reading a poem when I was growing my hair to donate it.

https://youtu.be/X9BEk6sqi4U

Finally here I am long hair and beard

https://youtu.be/Dzq2XxcWzPw

Listen to poem:

where crystals gleam i want to lie where the scented lily opens reveals its stamen tender as babies breath as unavoidable as our sun's and moon's provocative union as desirable as a cooling whisper on a hot humid day as necessary as the blistering heat a dream yet to be dreamt in my wanting an explosion an us reality you are the joy of laughter boxed, wrapped, gifted all the gems of no monetary value - priceless moments absorbed fully womanhood sings and i respond in kind climb beyond frozen minds where pianos open radiate warmth cradle purity my will nestled in the notes where crystals gleam i want to lie July 25 2016 Maurice Yvonne

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Ngaire Patiole

Date: 2/25/2020 9:44:00 PM

Love this

Paloma P

Date: 10/28/2016 5:16:00 PM

Such lush loveliness. A little bit sensual and a lot profound. A real gem to read.

Daver Austin

Date: 10/24/2016 1:40:00 PM

Caught this one again on the weekly features. Congrats on this wandering through the tender land. Love it daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2016 6:48:00 AM

Wow, I feel as if I just walked into a breathtaking scenery. Your desires are like wind causing debris everywhere you go, * that's good tantalizing Notes ... Luv. Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2016 12:32:00 AM

wow, ARmand. you are on TOP of the BEST POEMS list right now. Congratulations, and I hope you are doing well!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/21/2016 2:43:00 AM

Lovely, dear. It was great to SEE you as well. Now I know what you look and sound like. BTW....LOVE the long hair. :) Thanks for the visit. This poem is full of beautiful dreams and romance....Lovely

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/20/2016 6:44:00 PM

Great poem. I hope this note finds you well Armand.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/18/2016 2:53:00 AM

Wonderful seeing you reading your wonderful work and seeing your sweet mother Armand. This poem is exceptional, especially hearing you read it! ; ) 7

Seren Roberts

Date: 8/16/2016 11:12:00 PM

Loved it...Seren

John Fleming

Date: 8/13/2016 5:07:00 AM

Very, very lovely, Armand, in every single way...truly a really wonderful poem! My very best regards...And my warmest wishes. Your friend always. :) john

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/6/2016 5:24:00 PM

blessed to have read this re-write so profound and filled with melodious lines, armand!... higgs

Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/6/2016 5:26:00 PM

cheers on your POTD spotlight!

Jesse Day

Date: 8/5/2016 10:09:00 AM

Excellent work on this project! Your verse is tender and poetic. Great job! Jesse

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/24/2016 10:58:00 AM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2016 8:51:00 PM

Giving it another seven!!

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/24/2016 10:57:00 AM

Thanks!

Daver Austin

Date: 7/28/2016 2:32:00 PM

Alike a grave site idle. You becoming one with the beloved. Very tender stuff, Maurice. Good to hear from you again. Love, daver

Daver Austin
Date: 7/28/2016 2:35:00 PM

I do not visit YouTube or any of the other side shows, so I missed a lot of your input. Sorry. Will make up for it on my next visit. daver

David Smith

Date: 7/27/2016 7:36:00 PM

I like this. Beautiful thoughts brought the page intact. Congratulations. So many wonderful lines for me to treasure which you have given me for free. Best wishes from David in NZ

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 7/30/2016 1:49:00 PM

You are so kind, thank you.

Ronald Kent

Date: 7/27/2016 7:26:00 PM

Enjoy the day well deserved.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 7/30/2016 1:47:00 PM

Thank you!

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 7/29/2016 4:19:00 PM

Thank you!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2016 4:51:00 PM

Oh Armand I have a massive smile seeing you get POTD I remember being so moved when I saw the video the other week - loved it then and its even better to see it here on soup:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 7/29/2016 2:45:00 PM

Thank you sweetie!

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/27/2016 10:11:00 AM

Hi Armand, This is so beautiful and well written. I'm impressed. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor. A gigantic seven:-) Alexis P.S. What video? ?

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/30/2016 2:30:00 AM

You are most welcome. I went to your youtube page and it was a real pleasure to hear you read your poems. I saw the other videos as well:-) Alexis

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 7/29/2016 2:44:00 PM

I had a lovely visit at your pages and explained about the video. Thank you for your kind remarks.