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Before the dark obscures the sky, I sat gloomily looking out of the window, wondering why wishing one of the stars tonight will glide and send you smiles right here in my heart: a feeling that cannot deny creeping worries and gloom-----sinking to the bones of my fear, I close my eyes, hope and pray. Here, my heart trembles, fear of the unknown ghost of formidable weather in the origin, and what a pal humbly does, not to close the jar spills the ink, not to count the molecules on air if possible, pull down all the stars above all in her wish you’re at best right where you are. More thoughts of you, in succession comes lighting the pent-torch in search of love ones my echoes traverse, emotion balances: still, the fleck spreads out and runs in a glut sacred novena uncontrollably flooded since the start my ranging gloom. However, excitement of our plans await scribbling countless words….I wish my break swiftly comes on its wings ink profusely flows releasing conglomerations of feelings outpouring all the words from a pal’s warmest embrace dream once dreamt printed on my hymn: the pledge and the joys how we shared once through pen light and happiness: worries no more The power of ink, words unfold surge and drifts away as my fingers open a glint of hope, I’m waiting
Jan. 21, 2012 Nette, my dear poet friend and very talented kababayan come back home now, please. This poem which I hardly tried to write with the inspiration of one of your super winning poems is not primarily for the contest; (‘though I’m entering it) but, for me to send all my warmest thoughts of you. We’re missing you now here on soup. I hope you're doing well and hope to see you soon. Third Place Contest: Netted by Words: Her Silvered, Tender Web Judged: 2/19/2013 Sponsor: Poet Cyndi Macmillan
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Guzzi Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 6:23 PM
nette sure had her own style! lovely tribute verse. Congrad's Light & Love
Haick Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:47 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win Leonora! Great job you've done, for sure. I'm sure that Nette is proud. Love, Annalise
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February 21, 2013 at 4:56 PM
Hi Leonora, sweetie -pie... how are you... stopping by to say, and re-read this lovely gem for our missed Nette... wish we knew about her.. :-(... and thank you so so much, for the lovely comment on my sweet attempt in your cute contest... always~ PD
Roberts Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 11:12 PM
Leanora, Nette woud love this, well done ...Seren
Richards Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 3:55 PM
This heartfelt poem, if any would bring her back to friendship, this would indeed be the one. Lovely poem! And my heartfelt thanks for the surprise and the honor in placing my poem in your contest, Leonora! I am so thrilled! Thank you very much!!
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February 2, 2013 at 2:12 AM
Wonderful poem!
Carrillo Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 9:46 PM
Thanks so much for writing this beautiful poem. God bless you always. Lucilla
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 4:41 PM
rereading this one. such a beauty.
Richards Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 3:36 PM
Your heart is reaching out in this piece. Very touching it is!!
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January 27, 2013 at 8:09 AM
Because I am fairly new at the soup I do not know Nette very well or the reasons for her leaving, I do however know a moving piece when I read it. I am sure she will be moved by your words.
Kendrick Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 7:12 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 7:14 AM
Thanks so much for all the visits to my work..Your time there is appreciated..Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 11:21 PM
You honor dear Nette with this lovely tribute and entry. Blessings, Lotus
Sibanda Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 3:06 PM
What a humble plea. Great piece.
Horne Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 2:38 PM
lovely write and a lovely tribute to Nette too
A   Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 9:53 PM
A very touching poem and dedication to our dear Nette... I wish we knew about here. I hope this contest will attract her back to the soup. I truly love what you did to her poem. I like the way your ink unfolded. always & forever... PD
A   Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 9:51 PM
Hello sweetie pie:-) I' read this poem so many time while I'm at work. Sometimes it is hard to post a comment. three reasons. 1# I read it from my phone #2 A client took me away from your poem #3 lol..I'm lazy... I feel bad, cause I read and open this poem so many times... and yet I have not commented your poem.... please forgive me... always~ LINDA
Gasun Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 10:10 PM
No problem my dearest sisie-pooh. I always understand. Thank you so much your honesty and everything. Love always and 4ever, Leonora
Pettit Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 3:05 PM
Great way to express your feelings.
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 10:46 PM
Hi, Sweetie, thanks for your comments on my latest poem. I bet you are staying busy at your school!! Luv, Andrea
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January 22, 2013 at 5:20 PM
A good supportive poem. The best of luck. Dom
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January 22, 2013 at 7:05 AM
Leonora my friend, so lovely your pen .... A "letter" to our dear friend Nette ..... Yes, we miss her very much and hope all is well with her. - Where are you, Nette???? - Thank you for your lovely and well written poem Leonora. - Hope you have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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January 22, 2013 at 4:29 AM
fantastic poem my dear friend..I'm your fan...you're a great poet for me...good luck.. Its on the winner's list..I'm sure of that...God bless you always dear :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 12:21 AM
oh my gosh, I just saw this was your Nette inspired poem. It is super good. Maybe one of your best poems ever, Leonora. Keep it up. Wow, you took a while but you delivered a gem!
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January 21, 2013 at 2:13 PM
Loved from the first line!
Ellison Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 8:46 AM
An absolutely beautiful and tender reaching out to a dear friend. You have described your heart felt feelings in such eloquent verse! I'm sure many echo your words... love and hugs, Jack xox
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