Where Were You In the 70's

The question itself begs interpretation,
The word 'where' concealing so many implications
  Is this 'where' a physical place, or state of mind?
  Perhaps it's with a higher consciousness aligned?

Boston, London, Paris, or Rome? Cairo, Lisbon, Moscow, or Gnome?
Were you abroad? Were you at sea? Were you in space? --Or just at home?
  Perhaps you were in Timbuktu, or basking in the ambience of Xanadu,
  Sailing away on pink Chablis, sipping winter-blossom chartreuse tea.

The word itself is a siren, inviting by utterance unimaginable peregrinations
Of connotations, demarcations, gesticulations, imprecations--divinations!
  Fathomless depths, layers of meaning, shells of encasement, particulars
                                        beaming:
  'Here' is in 'where,' and so is 'were.'  Were you here? Where? Posibilities
                                        teeming..

Not to mention 'Ere' and 'Rhee:' Ere you were here, where were you, Rhee?
Ah, Rhee, my bold, my courageous, my daring--yet compassionate Draupadi.

Now ere I bid this poem adieu: Where were you in the 70s is the question.
  Hmmm. I can't really say.  Forgive me, please, this slight indiscretion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/18/2018 9:56:00 PM
Brilliant dance around the question, I loved it! Congratulations on your win :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/18/2018 10:51:00 PM
Ah, Maureen! You've summed up what I did so precisely. That's it--a dance around the topic. Thank you!
Date: 3/12/2018 8:35:00 AM
Very clever, indeed, Gershon! I enjoyed reading your poem and it made me smile too. Congrats on your win! Sandra :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/12/2018 12:38:00 PM
You smile makes the world go round, Sandra! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on the poem. May happiness reign! :) Gershon
Date: 3/11/2018 1:49:00 AM
This is clever, Gershon, and witty. Well done! Regards, Viv
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2018 12:52:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Viv, and thanks for visiting my site! Best regards, Gershon
Date: 3/10/2018 6:39:00 PM
This brought a smile !!! Thank you for a different twist to the contest entries! Loved it!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/10/2018 8:04:00 PM
Thank you!! And congrats again to you on your 1st place trophy. Ah, twilight....Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 3/10/2018 2:09:00 PM
Congratulation on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/10/2018 8:05:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. Appreciated! :) gw
Date: 3/10/2018 9:53:00 AM
You have quite a whimsical sense of humour, Gerson. You must have been quite the character in the 70's!! Congrats on a top placement with this witty poem.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/10/2018 8:07:00 PM
Thank you, Line. And thank you for sponsoring this contest, helping me and others to stretch our brains and our quills...As for character: Back then, yes, I was a bit of a character. And now---I have 'character.' You know what? --I'll take 'back then!' Blessings, Gershon
Date: 2/21/2018 11:33:00 AM
This is amazing, Gershon--so creative! Janice
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/21/2018 8:27:00 PM
Thank you, Janice. Your comment is highly prized. 'Creativity' does not come naturally to me at all. (0.1% inspiration; 99.9% perspiration)...Yet long may the "juices flow!" :-) Gershon
Date: 2/20/2018 9:45:00 PM
Wow! Gerson, first let me just say that I still love the 'Immigrant Song', but more importantly, I love your poem! It is ingenious, meaningful, witty, intriguing.. A superb write my friend! Yes, my hair was 'feathered back' a la Farrah.. :)) I hope all is well in Winter's Wonderland.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 2/20/2018 10:32:00 PM
Lol! Dr. J and the 76'ers.. what great team back then and I bet your Jewish Afro was one to remember too ;) ~Susan
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/20/2018 9:53:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words about the poem, and for letting me know that I'm not the only one on the planet who remembers the 'Immigrant Song.'...Your hair was 'lathered back,' whlle mine looked like a Jewish version of early Dr. J / Julius Erving's Afro. Oy, vey! Thanks for sharing memories. :-) Gershon
Date: 2/20/2018 9:02:00 PM
Nicely done! I was tucked away in my teens with bell bottom jeans, singing “I think I love you” with the psychedelic bus packed with the Partridge family, hair “feathered back” etc.. etc..
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Date: 2/20/2018 9:21:00 PM
Thanks for reading the poem, for your kind words, and LOL, for the memories of the Partridge family, hair 'feathered back.'...In 1970 and 71, I was walking around on campus, where windows wide open, stereos were cranked up to the max playing Led Zeppelin's 'Immigrant Song.' Hard to believe now, isn't it? :-) Gershon
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