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Where the Wind Blows

Over where winds blow, my Love waits for me
Even when zephyrs blow a bustling breeze
His outreaching arms beckon come let me see
Join me in my castle where you'll live with ease

Out on the porch listening to rain's soft sounds
There's no wind, leaves and limbs hang limp silent
Over where winds blow, my love knows no bounds
Contained it now seems ~no wind evident

Just a slight breeze will stir blossoming rose
Her scent a delight floating 'pon spring's breeze
Rose's scent entwines with honeysuckle's prose
Racing to where the wind blows, my love to please

Over where winds blow, He waits for just me
With outstretched arms, He calls come commune please

Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle
Contest: Where The Wind Blows
Written this 18th day of May, 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/8/2013 10:00:00 AM
You always write from a peaceful place Sara .. congratulations
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Date: 6/7/2013 9:48:00 AM
Good morning Sara, this is a very pleasing poem... glad to see it on Gail's winning list.. xox~Linda
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Date: 6/4/2013 7:06:00 PM
congrats on a great win Sara
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Date: 6/4/2013 9:34:00 AM
Hi Sara, love your poem. congratulations. Love Terry xoxo
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Date: 5/21/2013 6:44:00 AM
Beautiful :)
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Date: 5/20/2013 4:40:00 AM
- Sara, this is a poem I really cherish! - Soft and beautiful thoughts and words. - You will surely win - good luck! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/19/2013 12:00:00 PM
beautiful sonnet, my friend. congrats on your wins
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Date: 5/19/2013 4:08:00 AM
very fascinating write here, sara... soft words and gentle feeling throughout the poem...my favorite lines came in the 3rd stanza... so lovely!..:) huggs
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Date: 5/18/2013 3:33:00 PM
I am now relaxed after reading this delightful write my friend! You have entertained me with calmness and tranquility with your amazing poem here Sara! I truly loved reading this harmonious piece this afternoon, this is such a grand poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 5/18/2013 11:29:00 AM
Hi Sara, this is a winner, so beautiful and so relaxed one feels after reading your poem. As if your state of mind is ao relaxed. Hope so. Love T. xoxo a 7>>> & FAV.
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Date: 5/18/2013 10:31:00 AM
'Rose's scent entwines with honeysuckle prose'...Favorite line among many in this elegant sonnet, Sara...Reads like a sure winner - Tim
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Date: 5/18/2013 10:02:00 AM
Beautifully captured images in your poem, a delight to read.
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Date: 5/18/2013 9:21:00 AM
Sara, a very pleasing and soft images.. very graceful and worth the journey.. I love the sonnet. Hope you are fine :-) Always ~LINDA
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