Where the Wind Blows

ballet in the trees perfect synchronicity opus of the wind

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/17/2009 11:23:00 PM

Dear Barbara, Absolutely exquisite I feel the warmth of this POEM in my Heart and Soul ALWAYS YOURS...HG

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/4/2009 10:27:00 AM

hot one, nicely written, concise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/3/2009 9:35:00 AM

Congratulations on makin the hot poems list. Sara

Kate W

Date: 10/1/2009 7:42:00 PM

captured nature great write..............kate

Marty Owens

Date: 10/1/2009 7:07:00 PM

I've been reading your Haiku poems. This one is one of my favorites. Thanks for the comments on Slick and Slide. That was my first try and I know it is not the typical Haiku. Got any pointers. Thanks. Marty

James Fraser

Date: 10/1/2009 10:54:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Barbara, i have really enjoyed your recent writes >> James

Daver Austin

Date: 10/1/2009 5:20:00 AM

I'm looking out my kitchen window at the trees swaying. Your haiku fits beautifully. Love, daver

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 9/29/2009 3:34:00 PM

Barbara ~you beautifully captured all of nature ! Wonderful! Laura :)

Date: 9/29/2009 12:57:00 PM

Creative view captured in just three lines. Enjoyed it--especially the opening line. The title fits with the poem. Nice! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/29/2009 10:12:00 AM

~~~Magnificent Haiku Barbara~~~. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/29/2009 8:32:00 AM

I just said something similar to Raul....but I love combining music and poetry....you did it beautifully, Barbara !!! :) Love, Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/29/2009 6:31:00 AM

No one can "choreograph" the way Mother Nature does, Barbara. This is a beautifully written haiku, rich with awesome language and imagery. (I'm still out of town helping family, but had to stop by and say hello to my fellow LNC.) Great write! Love, Carolyn