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Where the Sun Shines

It's okay now, for women to go topless Oh my how the world it has changed Some boobies are perky others floppy With the help of gravity some rearranged Now don't get me wrong, I'm not complaining The female form is a delightful sight Yet sometimes I need to shield my eyes Those white boobies are awfully bright Us male drivers, completly distracted Concerned for safety we have all slowed down Many come from all over in hopes of a peek They say kelowna is their kind of town Please forgive us we don't mean to stare It's just our way of showing support When it comes to rights we'll gladly take part We would have fought to free boobies in court So ladies I say walk around with pride You are an inspiration to everyone Be careful to apply a whole lot of lotion You don't want them beauties burnt by the sun In sunny Kelowna it is now legal for a woman to walk topless down a public street. Sadly no women have opted to take advantage of this new found freedom.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2013 7:38:00 PM

amazing win...Linda

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/22/2013 9:50:00 PM

Thanks Linda.

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/19/2013 8:48:00 PM

hmmm my cup of tea! i am all in support here! lols Congrats on your win. Morgan

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/22/2013 9:50:00 PM

I thought you might be willing to offer support, *lol*

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/19/2013 5:13:00 PM

Interesting winning work..Interesting law..Don't think that I would move there though..I need all the support I can get..Congrats..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/22/2013 9:51:00 PM

Thanks Sara

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 9/19/2013 3:12:00 PM

Geez, you'll have me packing and off to Kelowna in a wink, except that I was also struck by gravity. I'd never be able to run in Kelowna for fear of black eyes. Congratulations on your superb win, Richard. Nice one. Licia :-)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/19/2013 3:20:00 PM

Ha ha! Darn that gravity. I wasn't sure how this one would be received. Perhaps you could start the freedom movement in your area.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/19/2013 8:23:00 AM

wow...they could never walk around topless in these parts, but that could be a good thing...cute poem....congrats on your win :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/19/2013 3:22:00 PM

Thanks Sandra. Where are you from? I think you told me once but i can't seem to remember where it is.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/19/2013 7:45:00 AM

Lol Richard think of the pileups if some did. Love it dear congrats on place

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/19/2013 3:23:00 PM

:0)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2013 10:28:00 PM

wow, they can walk topless there? Where the heck is this place? And that is so funny that nobody is using their newfound freedom, a law which was simply man's ploy to please himself. haha. This was a most interesting entry in the contest and I much enjoyed it. Loved the line about "showing support" Can you be a double D? heehee

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/19/2013 3:26:00 PM

Interior of British Columbia here in Western Canada. On the shores of Lake Okanagan.

Nancy Jones

Date: 9/18/2013 10:00:00 PM

A grinner for sure. Work on that form, you got fun stuff to say, it seems. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Namaste ~ N

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/19/2013 3:25:00 PM

Not my most eloquent piece but it was a fun one to write. Thanks for choosing it for your list.

Red Fiery

Date: 9/14/2013 9:11:00 AM

7/7 is not enough..!!!!!!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/14/2013 1:26:00 PM

Glad you liked my attempt at humor. Not many comments, perhaps to risque.

Red Fiery

Date: 9/14/2013 9:10:00 AM

Irresistibly great...!!!!!!!!!!..speechless. ..shhshhshh !

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/14/2013 7:36:00 AM

RICHARD.........

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/14/2013 8:03:00 AM

Ha ha! Thanks for responding as only you can.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/14/2013 7:47:00 AM

BTW...Please stop staring at those boobies long enough to check Shadow's blog on the collaborative work just to make sure we are on the right track, ok? Also....wear shades..that way they won't know you are staring...was going to add something else, but it might not be in good taste! I'll leave you wondering. Don't forget Shadow's blog. See ya!...NOT on the streets of Kelowna! ;) Or maybe...OK OK...I'm going!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/14/2013 7:43:00 AM

Pretty much!!! I mean.....what do I write as a post to this???? Skinny dipping in the sea...OK...that's one thing...In a secluded place...being free, but....walking on the street TOPLESS! You Canadians have gone OVERBOARD. Wait till I tell my sister-in-law. Her family lives in Kelowna and she was there this past summer! Hmmmmm....You didn't mean to stare...yea right! ;) Naughty you!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/14/2013 7:38:00 AM

Have I rendered you speechless *lol*