Richard Lamoureux Poet Quatrain

Where the Sun Shines

It's okay now, for women to go topless
Oh my how the world it has changed
Some boobies are perky others floppy
With the help of gravity some rearranged

Now don't get me wrong, I'm not complaining
The female form is a delightful sight
Yet sometimes I need to shield my eyes
Those white boobies are awfully bright 

Us male drivers, completly distracted
Concerned for safety we have all slowed down
Many come from all over in hopes of a peek
They say kelowna is their kind of town

Please forgive us we don't mean to stare
It's just our way of showing support
When it comes to rights we'll gladly take part
We would have fought to free boobies in court

So ladies I say walk around with pride
You are an inspiration to everyone
Be careful to apply a whole lot of lotion
You don't want them beauties burnt by the sun



In sunny Kelowna it is now legal for a woman to walk
topless down a public street. Sadly no women
have opted to take advantage of this new found freedom.

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Poet Destroyer A September 22, 2013 at 7:38 PM amazing win...Linda Richard Lamoureux September 22, 2013 at 9:50 PM Thanks Linda.

Danesh Morgan September 19, 2013 at 8:48 PM hmmm my cup of tea! i am all in support here! lols Congrats on your win. Morgan Richard Lamoureux September 22, 2013 at 9:50 PM I thought you might be willing to offer support, *lol*

Sara Kendrick September 19, 2013 at 5:13 PM Interesting winning work..Interesting law..Don't think that I would move there though..I need all the support I can get..Congrats..Sara Richard Lamoureux September 22, 2013 at 9:51 PM Thanks Sara

Delysia Hendricks September 19, 2013 at 3:12 PM Geez, you'll have me packing and off to Kelowna in a wink, except that I was also struck by gravity. I'd never be able to run in Kelowna for fear of black eyes. Congratulations on your superb win, Richard. Nice one. Licia :-) Richard Lamoureux September 19, 2013 at 3:20 PM Ha ha! Darn that gravity. I wasn't sure how this one would be received. Perhaps you could start the freedom movement in your area.

Sandra Adams September 19, 2013 at 8:23 AM wow...they could never walk around topless in these parts, but that could be a good thing...cute poem....congrats on your win :) Richard Lamoureux September 19, 2013 at 3:22 PM Thanks Sandra. Where are you from? I think you told me once but i can't seem to remember where it is.

Shadow Hamilton September 19, 2013 at 7:45 AM Lol Richard think of the pileups if some did. Love it dear congrats on place Richard Lamoureux September 19, 2013 at 3:23 PM :0)

Andrea Dietrich September 18, 2013 at 10:28 PM wow, they can walk topless there? Where the heck is this place? And that is so funny that nobody is using their newfound freedom, a law which was simply man's ploy to please himself. haha. This was a most interesting entry in the contest and I much enjoyed it. Loved the line about "showing support" Can you be a double D? heehee Richard Lamoureux September 19, 2013 at 3:26 PM Interior of British Columbia here in Western Canada. On the shores of Lake Okanagan.

Nancy Jones September 18, 2013 at 10:00 PM A grinner for sure. Work on that form, you got fun stuff to say, it seems. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Namaste ~ N Richard Lamoureux September 19, 2013 at 3:25 PM Not my most eloquent piece but it was a fun one to write. Thanks for choosing it for your list.

Red Fiery September 14, 2013 at 9:11 AM 7/7 is not enough..!!!!!!! Richard Lamoureux September 14, 2013 at 1:26 PM Glad you liked my attempt at humor. Not many comments, perhaps to risque.

Red Fiery September 14, 2013 at 9:10 AM Irresistibly great...!!!!!!!!!!..speechless. ..shhshhshh !

Eileen Manassian September 14, 2013 at 7:36 AM RICHARD......... Richard Lamoureux September 14, 2013 at 8:03 AM Ha ha! Thanks for responding as only you can. Eileen Manassian September 14, 2013 at 7:47 AM BTW...Please stop staring at those boobies long enough to check Shadow's blog on the collaborative work just to make sure we are on the right track, ok? Also....wear shades..that way they won't know you are staring...was going to add something else, but it might not be in good taste! I'll leave you wondering. Don't forget Shadow's blog. See ya!...NOT on the streets of Kelowna! ;) Or maybe...OK OK...I'm going! Eileen Manassian September 14, 2013 at 7:43 AM Pretty much!!! I mean.....what do I write as a post to this???? Skinny dipping in the sea...OK...that's one thing...In a secluded place...being free, but....walking on the street TOPLESS! You Canadians have gone OVERBOARD. Wait till I tell my sister-in-law. Her family lives in Kelowna and she was there this past summer! Hmmmmm....You didn't mean to stare...yea right! ;) Naughty you! Richard Lamoureux September 14, 2013 at 7:38 AM Have I rendered you speechless *lol*