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Where the Quiet Went

I kept the window cracked so the wind could speak for you-- all your unsaid apologies tangled in the curtain hem. You used to hum when you left. Now the walls just listen. You were always the one who made absence feel full. But now the rooms are hollow, a cathedral of ache. “The silence fades with a soft embrace”-- but you forgot to hold me first. At night, I dream in fragments-- your keys, your coat, your breath. Grief is a voice I never learned to answer. I ask for a sign. The air forgets me again.

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Date: 5/18/2025 2:42:00 PM
Absence can haunt the airways. Turn the quiet into grief, that suffocates moments, even ones we need to share. Raw and visceral. Your writing is a real gift.
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Alesia Leach
Date: 5/23/2025 4:19:00 PM
Paige, your words resonate like the echo this piece was meant to carry. You understand exactly how silence can press in, sharp and suffocating. Thank you for feeling the ache and still calling it a gift--your kindness holds space where absence once lived.

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