Where the Pomegranates Grow

Outside the city where the pomegranates grow
there's a place so quiet and pretty
every chance, I get, I go
It's not often enough, that I can stroll among these trees
with the flavor of this fruit in a cool dry mountain breeze
But when the city gets to crowded
that it begins to over flow
I go outside the city, where the pomegranates grow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gulley Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 6:20 PM
I like this wonderfully flowing piece Jerry. I like pomegranates too. Tasty. : ) Sharon
Delaney Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 7:02 PM
I like this pomegranate poem. Inspiring and peaceful....a place to go. SuZ
Scars Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Oh Jerry, this is so wonderful..well written..thank you for stopping by and reading my poem! :)-luloo
Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 4:12 PM
Ahh!! I like this one..My husband has several plants and he loves those pomegranates but not my favorite..Thanks for the visit to my page..I like the figs and pears better...Sara
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 3:35 PM
this is so lovely. I like it a lot, Jerry.
Curtis Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 3:44 PM
Thank you Andrea
Laurie Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 8:31 PM
Hello Jerry ... I too am a fan of pomegranates and I would visit your haven to eat them - Lindsay
Curtis Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 3:46 PM
that's the reason I don't tell anyone where it is, lol--thanks Mate
Smith Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 2:45 PM
A beautiful place to be JT
Curtis Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 3:47 PM
Thanks Timmy we all need a place like it
Turner Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 8:30 AM
A very soothing comforting write, Jerry. Enjoyed the read. Peace my friend:)
Curtis Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Thanks Daniel, I'm going to swing by a little later to read what you've been up too
Muideen Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 8:08 AM
It palpable depicts, you really often enjoy yourself under pomegrante tree. Thanks for sharing.......A.M.
Curtis Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 3:49 PM
Thank you so much Afolabi God Bless......
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