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Where the Meat Meets the Street

The motorcycle rooooooooared~~~~~ Like a ravenous lion Over fresh kill, prancing, charging, pacing It Moved through the hoard Of migrating tourists, frightening the tamer More passive vagabonds Lumbering Forward On cruise-control The nameless helmeted driver Melded with his machine, Head down. Spine arched, arms extended on the throttles~~ Blue-jeaned thighs embrace the chasse A lovers grip.. His forward charge parted the air A back draft peeled the Harley black T-shirt from His winter-white skin. Spring had arrived late to New England. Better late than never, The road hog squealed Sex merely a throbbing growl away As our lance less Lothario leaves His own testosterone trail In an asphalt hail On the road north.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/1/2011 1:08:00 PM
This is amazing.The imagery is wonderful.Each line is excellent.I have said it before,I like the way you write*cheers*
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Date: 6/1/2011 9:42:00 AM
Your masterful play on words makes this a smooth and polished piece. Well done, Debbie. ^__^
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Date: 6/1/2011 9:37:00 AM
Amazing imagery, Debbie. I expected him to run over a squirrel too LOL. Thanks for the advice - no punctuation at all in tankas/haiku? I'll change the title and lose the punctuation then : )
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Date: 6/1/2011 9:01:00 AM
ahah! a roller coaster of hormonal action here unsurpassed by JACK in the box! a greeeat SHIFT of gears with an enjabment of poetic images branching, leafing yet contained! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:16:00 AM
Some amazing imagery happening here, Debbie. "testsoterone trail, In an asphalt hail", pure ectasy for the biker! Reminds me of my husband...from the "hog" to the "Harley black T-shirt". I'm sure that bike had been the love of his life.:) Wishing you the best and yours the best!! Mikki
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:14:00 AM
wow !!! sophisticated work of experienced poet!!great! fantastic! amazing! thanks again to your kind comments in my poems... ---^_^ junjun
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