Where the Meat Meets the Street

The motorcycle rooooooooared~~~~~
Like a ravenous lion 
	Over fresh kill, prancing, charging, pacing
It
	Moved through the hoard
Of migrating tourists, frightening the tamer
	More passive vagabonds
Lumbering
	Forward
		On cruise-control
The nameless helmeted driver
Melded with his machine,
	Head down. Spine arched, 
arms extended on the throttles~~
Blue-jeaned thighs embrace the chasse
A lovers grip..
	His forward charge parted the air
A back draft peeled the Harley black T-shirt from
His 	winter-white skin.
Spring had arrived late to New England.
Better late than never,
	The road hog squealed 
	Sex merely a throbbing growl away
As our lance less Lothario leaves
His own testosterone trail
	In an asphalt hail
		On the road north.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/1/2011 1:08:00 PM
This is amazing.The imagery is wonderful.Each line is excellent.I have said it before,I like the way you write*cheers*
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Date: 6/1/2011 9:42:00 AM
Your masterful play on words makes this a smooth and polished piece. Well done, Debbie. ^__^
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Date: 6/1/2011 9:37:00 AM
Amazing imagery, Debbie. I expected him to run over a squirrel too LOL. Thanks for the advice - no punctuation at all in tankas/haiku? I'll change the title and lose the punctuation then : )
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Date: 6/1/2011 9:01:00 AM
ahah! a roller coaster of hormonal action here unsurpassed by JACK in the box! a greeeat SHIFT of gears with an enjabment of poetic images branching, leafing yet contained! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:16:00 AM
Some amazing imagery happening here, Debbie. "testsoterone trail, In an asphalt hail", pure ectasy for the biker! Reminds me of my husband...from the "hog" to the "Harley black T-shirt". I'm sure that bike had been the love of his life.:) Wishing you the best and yours the best!! Mikki
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:14:00 AM
wow !!! sophisticated work of experienced poet!!great! fantastic! amazing! thanks again to your kind comments in my poems... ---^_^ junjun
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