Where the Heart Beats

Where The Heart Beats
________________________________(Started)_______by:  Nathan Dilts
Thump budda thump thump
Thump budda thump thump

Can you feel it beating
Faster
Always faster
Shaped just like an aster
The mitosis of an emotion
Where the notion of its motion
Travels up through my spine
Wraps around my mind
 
Thump budda budda thump thump
Thump budda budda thump thump

Can you feel it flowing
Like a diamond
That is glowing
Never knowing
Where it’s going
Always showing
What it’s growing
 _________________________________(Finish)_________by:  P.D.
Thump thump thump thump thumper
Thump thump thump thump thumper

Can you feel it changing
Rapidly emerging 
Losing its curve 
Tightening the nerve
Energy reload
Waves about to explode 
Accepting the negative
Rejecting the positive

Thump budda thump
Thump budda thump
Can you feel it fading
Melting away
Pulsing its rays
Relaxing base
Freezing phase 
Boiling down 
Drumming sound

Thump    Budda     thump 
Can you feel it dying
Losing its shine
Dim neon lite
Weak to krypton nite 
Lost of resistance
Fading existence 
Moments are bleeding
Wakening to his feeding

Thump--- bud..dha ----thuu..mp
Can you feel it dropping
My heart is stopping
My inside are not rotating
My body is the axis
My heart, I'm its universe
Faintly a flash in my chest
Trying to beat again
Crying for a chance
Slower 
pounding slower
Thum p___thuuu_____________  Stop Beating
Can not feel it the beating is gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/25/2013 8:33:00 AM
Linda You created a wonderful and unique write. I can feel your heart going through all the emotions and hear it beating and breaking from verse to verse. Nice job my friend Hugs
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Date: 9/7/2013 6:04:00 PM
Well this is different ;} thank you for reading My Midnight Sun,,,,, which I did not know was featured ;} I wish there was a way I knew which ones I've read ;}
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Date: 8/17/2013 6:32:00 PM
How's your heart doing now my Sweet Dark Friend? How many times do I need to ask? lol Take care, Richard
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Date: 11/17/2012 6:14:00 AM
Your poems are all unique my greatest poet, friend and sis! Hand salute and two thumbs up and all gestures for great admiration here! Thanks for the extreme joy tonight while reading this. take care always! love always, Leonora
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Date: 9/10/2012 4:57:00 PM
Loss of resistance, fading existance moments are bleeding, (awakening) to his feeding. Awsome stanza. sorry about the correction i pointed out. We think a little alike.. Thanks for the read; I like going further back.. TC
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Date: 8/9/2012 10:11:00 PM
My penal gland recently blossomed,my heart chakra subsequently went wild - this passionate composition expresses alot of what I went through,happily,excitedly - although my heart didn't stop this tyme - I thank Deity for your talent - J.A.B.
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:27:00 PM
Yes, PD. He is hard to read!! I never know who he will choose or if I will get on his list. you and he do think a lot alike so it's easy to see why he picked yours. Congrats again.
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Date: 8/4/2012 10:08:00 PM
so what are the things you used to do that you are ignoring now? My daughter in law smokes and it's irritating because she has the new baby. Even smoking during the pregnancy. But the baby seems healthy, thank heavens and I do love my daughter in law. She and Jeremy are moving FINALLY to Oregon together. she just got custody of her two kids finally and can leave Utah.
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Date: 6/29/2012 11:10:00 PM
Great collabo..love the roller coaster ride..the flow was beautiful as well...real smooth.
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Date: 6/15/2012 9:04:00 PM
THATS IT I AM CONVINCED YOUR A POETIC GENIUS!!!
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Date: 4/15/2012 4:17:00 PM
Thank you again for taking time out of your day and writing such a beautiful Happy Birthday just for me. Love u hun!!! xoxo
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Date: 12/1/2011 5:02:00 AM
* "Good Morning, My Dear Sweet Beautiful Linda * Thought I Would Journey Through Your Precious Beauties Poetry * Found This, Jewel of Paradise * As I Have Said * Your Beautiful & Gifted Brush Paints A Wide Spectrum of Splendid & Fascinating Hues * This Beauty Touched My Heart Deeply * My Luv To Your Beauty, Always * Sarah." *
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Date: 9/21/2010 1:57:00 PM
The cardiac poet ... and a superhero imagination, pure gift and creativity flowing here.
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Date: 7/30/2010 6:30:00 AM
sounds a bit like like a reqium funeral song. bring the flowers and pump the power
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Date: 7/28/2010 8:31:00 PM
Great rhythm and flow. Nice read.
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Date: 6/25/2010 4:51:00 AM
A wonderful co-write, PD.. in my opinion, this is one of your best poems..it has a philosophic touch.. Kisses, Emily
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Date: 6/21/2010 4:09:00 PM
your heart must be the magma within its world.now this poem is burning with emotion. they sound like lyrics.(: i hope your days is a slam Ms.Sid.. & just in case you are interested, i have been writing an enigma, its a very special one, its been taking me a while to write it though.& i believe it will be the last one that i am able to write. take care, now i am on to the next one. ~Always&Forever Lynn
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Date: 6/20/2010 11:56:00 PM
Very inventive poetry PD.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/20/2010 4:48:00 AM
Great wordplay poet...so entertaining...^_^ v
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Date: 6/20/2010 12:43:00 AM
Hello P.D - what a super co-write you have here, I love how you developed the theme started by Nathan. You did a great job in speeding up and then slowing down the read in time to the beat of that heart - great stuff. Thanks for your comments on Rudolph btw ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 6/19/2010 8:05:00 PM
Very expressive and real. Thanks for your comments on my poems
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Date: 6/19/2010 10:03:00 AM
My heart is still beating could feel all of that sarah x
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:00:00 AM
i love this one :) and nice finish i love how you said everything i could almost feel it how the heart stop beating and went slower
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Date: 6/18/2010 7:39:00 PM
Nice wording and thump thumping. Thanks for your reading of my latest. My you are fast. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/18/2010 9:32:00 AM
Beating, flowing, changing, fading, dying and dropping. What a brilliant poem you have created taking us on the journey of life and its different stages which all relates and response as per the changing mood of heart beats. Great write my friend and again a new creative approach. And many thanks for your most valued comments on Patradoot 22. Love and best wishes always......Ravindra......Poet D
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