Where the Grass Was Greener

I saw that superficial heaven. 
The streets were lined with 
diamonds and glitter rained 
from the sky. The sun shined a 
bright rose gold and the sky a 
great blue. There were flakes 
of gold hanging from the trees 
and everything glowed. I could 
see the stars in the distance 
made of crystal. The moon 
made of something white and 
shining. The wind felt like silk 
from a king's bed on my skin. 
The grass was littered with 
glitter and golden flakes. So 
much so that it glowed under 
the gold sun. As I walked down 
the sidewalk I could hear a soft 
melody growing louder with 
each step. It was all so 
beautiful. It really was. But 
then I looked across the fence 
and saw another heaven. The 
street was lined with flowers. 
Sun rays danced across the 
green field. The sky was just as 
blue as my current heaven but 
there was something greater 
about it. And then I realized 
that the glitz and glamour of 
the diamonds and rose gold did 
not hinder it's intensity. I saw 
different shades of yellow and 
red leaves hanging from the 
trees and realized just how tall 
the trees were. The stars 
twinkled just a little but that 
was ok because the simplicity 
of it made it that much more 
beautiful to me. The grass was 
green. Very green and soft. 
That's when I realized I had 
walked into this heaven but 
didn't remember climbing the 
fence. I looked down and 
realized I was barefoot. I was 
no longer wearing red 
bottomed heels. And it felt 
good. I took off running across 
the field and the wind rushed 
past me. There was something 
about this wind that felt cooler 
on my skin. Made me feel free 
and refreshed. I noticed that I 
did not hear the crunch of the 
grass under my feet. Only my 
laughter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/11/2014 6:14:00 AM
I felt as if I was there with you....A refreshing write to my soul!!! Beautiful images that took me there. Enjoyed
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