Where Stars Are

By everyone else, he seemed quite a bother.
But to me, he wasn’t, couldn’t, isn’t;
He, like me, was often distant.
He wanted to look through my telescope at the stars,
but it was daylight - not where stars are.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 6, 2016 at 9:44 PM
Phil, I'll be waiting for a new poem from you, but of course you will have to tap me on the shoulder, I hardly ever read the incoming poems. HUGS. LINDA
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February 8, 2016 at 1:11 PM
Sure thing! I'll be sure to letcha know when I post some new work :)
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February 4, 2016 at 7:26 AM
:) have a sweet day
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February 4, 2016 at 8:01 AM
It is pouring today, but I typically write better when it's raining. Expect some new work soon :D :) Have a wonderful day :3
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February 3, 2016 at 10:08 PM
thank you for the reply
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February 4, 2016 at 7:04 AM
Absolutely :)
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February 3, 2016 at 1:18 AM
Great write.... LINDA
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February 3, 2016 at 8:04 AM
Thank you, Linda!
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