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Speechless clementine horizons infuse lilac hues, tinting twilight's tepid breeze, reflecting sensually, kissing tranquil waters, forming momentary ripples. Chocolate cosmos awake greeted by fresh frangipani, blending luscious flavours into an aromatic paradise. Mockingbirds serenade sun into a silent slumber, its fluorescent friend parades a galaxy of pellucid pearls. Menagerie trails lead to zeniths where only eagles soar, where vermilion dahlia sneak through mountainous smoke, isolated by time - haunted by ghosts of ancestral Apache. Silent One 6 January 2018
Example for 10 word and 10 lines challenge contest. Ten words used: Menagerie Vermilion Infuse Mockingbirds Twilight Frangipani Luscious Pellucid Ancestral Ripples

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Date: 1/12/2018 5:19:00 PM
I would not touch this poem to make it best,when it is already is. Nicely don S.O. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 1/9/2018 2:52:00 PM
Strong mystic undertones in this richly descriptive poem, SO. Your golden pen crafted another excellent offering. A must re-read poem for sure. Love and best wishes always.
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Date: 1/9/2018 9:20:00 AM
I WILL TRY THIS. Challenge excepted - Silent One.
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Silent One
Date: 1/9/2018 9:21:00 AM
Good luck, maybe you can enter the contest..
Date: 1/8/2018 1:24:00 PM
ohh, now i feel squeaky to write something good for this challenge, S.O... this is fantastic!..huggs
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Date: 1/8/2018 9:22:00 AM
how can anyone compare to this, just saying. You wrote an outstanding example for your contest ;) -lullooo
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Date: 1/7/2018 7:34:00 PM
Hi S/O…this is an awesome example and quite a challenge!~Che :)
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Date: 1/7/2018 6:03:00 PM
Nice done, now my turn :)
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Date: 1/7/2018 5:03:00 PM
Creative flow!
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Date: 1/7/2018 11:05:00 AM
a very beautiful example of your contest, Silent One. I am seeing some incredible writing produced by your choice of words for them!
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Date: 1/7/2018 1:19:00 AM
Impressive as always. You set the bar high again with this contest. I particularly love this line'Chocolate cosmos awake greeted by fresh frangipani'. Frangipani of every hue are blooming in Australia at the moment.....Maria
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Date: 1/7/2018 12:52:00 AM
The poem wanders on high peak. I wonder, but cannot reach. Congrats to Truly Talented Poet. Blessing
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Date: 1/7/2018 12:13:00 AM
This reads like a treasure map. Beautiful concoction of magic words to cast a spell.
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Date: 1/6/2018 8:10:00 PM
Wow!...I think you beat the challenge Silent, very well crafted :)
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Date: 1/6/2018 7:14:00 PM
I just learned a new word, Frangipani! Simply gorgeous, Si! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 1/6/2018 5:36:00 PM
A shinning example of merging these creative words into a poem Silent! Bravo! : )
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Date: 1/6/2018 4:51:00 PM
well there you go! All the words! Nice!
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Date: 1/6/2018 3:42:00 PM
You set the bar high with this fabulous write.
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Silent One
Date: 1/6/2018 3:51:00 PM
Thanks Richard..
Date: 1/6/2018 2:48:00 PM
- Wonderful poem with words that can not be translated into Norwegian (by google :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Silent One
Date: 1/6/2018 3:18:00 PM
Most have simple English translations... Thank you Anne Lise..
Date: 1/6/2018 1:21:00 PM
Wow, Silent! This blows me away! Very awesome write! Good luck in the contest. This will top the charts.
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 1/6/2018 8:02:00 PM
Ohhhhh...I'm such a dork sometimes!
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Silent One
Date: 1/6/2018 3:19:00 PM
It is my contrest Rhoda... Cant enter my own! Thank you..
Date: 1/6/2018 12:28:00 PM
I can't imagine one topping this, great work SO...
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Silent One
Date: 1/6/2018 3:20:00 PM
Thank you Charlie... I am sure they will all be better than this..
Date: 1/6/2018 11:58:00 AM
Well written, Silent One..seems challenging to write, but you did well!
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Silent One
Date: 1/6/2018 3:42:00 PM
Thank you Vijay.. The ten words led to this poem..
Date: 1/6/2018 11:55:00 AM
Phantasmagoria of language! Impressive my friend, S.O.
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Silent One
Date: 1/6/2018 3:42:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios..
Date: 1/6/2018 11:22:00 AM
Beautiful poem, the lines are music. You make it seem easy to include the words. perhaps I will give it a go!
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Silent One
Date: 1/6/2018 3:43:00 PM
I tjink you should Iris... Thanks for the feedback..
Date: 1/6/2018 11:16:00 AM
Beautiful write here, my friend. Thanks for commenting to my poem.
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Silent One
Date: 1/6/2018 3:44:00 PM
Thank you AM..
Date: 1/6/2018 10:35:00 AM
Silent, so beautifully dreamy, a wonderful example for your contest !
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Silent One
Date: 1/6/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thank you Constance..
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