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Where Spirits Never Die

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Speechless clementine horizons infuse lilac hues, tinting twilight's tepid breeze, reflecting sensually, kissing tranquil waters, forming momentary ripples. Chocolate cosmos awake greeted by fresh frangipani, blending luscious flavours into an aromatic paradise. Mockingbirds serenade sun into a silent slumber, its fluorescent friend parades a galaxy of pellucid pearls. Menagerie trails lead to zeniths where only eagles soar, where vermilion dahlia sneak through mountainous smoke, isolated by time - haunted by ghosts of ancestral Apache. Silent One 6 January 2018 Example for 10 word and 10 lines challenge contest. Ten words used: Menagerie Vermilion Infuse Mockingbirds Twilight Frangipani Luscious Pellucid Ancestral Ripples

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/12/2018 5:19:00 PM

I would not touch this poem to make it best,when it is already is. Nicely don S.O. Have a nice evening my friend.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/9/2018 2:52:00 PM

Strong mystic undertones in this richly descriptive poem, SO. Your golden pen crafted another excellent offering. A must re-read poem for sure. Love and best wishes always.

Chante Reeves

Date: 1/9/2018 9:20:00 AM

I WILL TRY THIS. Challenge excepted - Silent One.

Silent One
Date: 1/9/2018 9:21:00 AM

Good luck, maybe you can enter the contest..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/8/2018 1:24:00 PM

ohh, now i feel squeaky to write something good for this challenge, S.O... this is fantastic!..huggs

Lu Loo

Date: 1/8/2018 9:22:00 AM

how can anyone compare to this, just saying. You wrote an outstanding example for your contest ;) -lullooo

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 1/7/2018 7:34:00 PM

Hi S/O…this is an awesome example and quite a challenge!~Che :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/7/2018 6:03:00 PM

Nice done, now my turn :)

Sherry Beck

Date: 1/7/2018 5:03:00 PM

Creative flow!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2018 11:05:00 AM

a very beautiful example of your contest, Silent One. I am seeing some incredible writing produced by your choice of words for them!

Maria Williams

Date: 1/7/2018 1:19:00 AM

Impressive as always. You set the bar high again with this contest. I particularly love this line'Chocolate cosmos awake greeted by fresh frangipani'. Frangipani of every hue are blooming in Australia at the moment.....Maria