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Where Poppies Grow

Where poppies grow in brilliant bursts of red
and bumble bees go searching with intent,
she often goes; there sits with dreamy eyes
suspending time, quiescent moments spent.

The wind intrudes on chain of mellow thoughts;
it sifts through youthful zest deprived of guile.
With gaze serene, she twirls a lock of hair
as lips betray a fleeting wistful smile.

Though far away, his presence lingers near;
his kiss like sunlight’s warmth on shoulders bare.
It seems to her, he whispers in her ear.
She breathes the fragrance of his tender care.

A sigh escapes her lips as she recalls
his body close to hers in moonlit night.
The promise that he made before goodbye
now makes her quiver with a strange delight.

For she has yet to know the fervent thrill
that overtakes the soul in love's embrace.
On his return, he’ll claim her for his own,
but now each nymph of nature wears his face.

A Callman Collaboration
Paul Callus and Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hind Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 2:24 PM
You are quite a poetess. I have been reading and reading and you're in my favs. May you get your book of poems. <3
Ashley Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 8:32 PM
Eileen, I was swept up and away by the tender beauty and romance of your collaboration with Paul. Rapture rides your dreamy poetic lines with rhythmic grace and your enchanted pens fuse seamlessly to bewitch my passionate imagination. Your muses combine in artistic radiance to light up my heart. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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March 28, 2020 at 8:21 AM
WoW! Eileen, You and Paul have penned a lovely collaboration. I found it to be sensual and passionate. You and Paul write well together, I’m a fan of you both. I hope all is well with you. Stay safe my friend:-) Alexis
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March 24, 2020 at 1:37 PM
Oh, I enjoyed this thoroughly, Eileen - rhythm/metre, phrasing, word choice, metaphor and imagery, story, romantic crimping - all the elements that pique my imagination and satisfy my spirit! Very well-done, you and Paul should be very proud of this write - going into my faves. Blessings! :o) <3
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March 23, 2020 at 10:18 AM
Finally I have found the time to stop by and reread our (14th) collaboration, and the comments that accompany it! Thank you for being such a wonderful friend and partner to write with. Hugs // paul
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March 23, 2020 at 8:32 AM
Thanks for your visit Eileen. Hugs Rick.
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March 22, 2020 at 11:53 AM
Hi Eileen, this is an awesome collaboration you have both written. Within the gentle words, such peaceful emotions displayed. The visions that fill my mind are indeed wondrous. This is romance at its best. This is the gentle poetry that touches my heart. This has to be a fav. Stay blessed, Eileen. Your friend always....Mike.
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March 23, 2020 at 8:00 AM
What a lovely comment! Thank you, Mike. Very kind of you. I'll visit your work soon.
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March 22, 2020 at 9:42 AM
What a marvelous collaboration and what a glorious result dearest, Eileen and dearest Paul. I have just visited the fields and took a lot of pictures some of which I have posted however, your poem surpasses in beauty any picture of mine! Congratulations to both!
Manassian Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 7:59 AM
Thank you, dear esteemed poet. Your praise is in itself a glorious flower. Blessings :)
Roper Avatar
March 22, 2020 at 12:39 AM
Beautiful... A great collaboration
Manassian Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 7:58 AM
Thanks for visiting, dear. :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 5:05 PM
Bravo for this wonderful poem you wrote, Eileen. I love the connection of the woman's thoughts with nature and the beauty of the poppies!
Manassian Avatar
March 23, 2020 at 7:57 AM
Thanks!! I have Paul to thank for the idea. He started with nature and I got romantic. That's the magic of poetry...
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March 21, 2020 at 8:33 AM
It’s good to read a passionate piece about poppies. For once no blood or personal loss. When I read the title, this was not what I expected. Hugs Rick.
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March 23, 2020 at 7:56 AM
Thanks, Richard. I'm glad you liked this piece. Paul and I do write well together. He usually gives me a starting point and let's me continue. Very gentlemanly of him. It seems pretty seamless. I'm glad you agree. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 8:34 AM
You two do write well together.;0)
Bauer Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 12:51 PM
beautifully written, eileen - a superb collaboration! kudos to you both...
Manassian Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 3:48 AM
Thanks, dear. I enjoy writing with Paul. He is an amazing poet. Hope all is well with you and your family during these trying times. Hugs
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March 19, 2020 at 6:28 PM
You and Paul collaborate well together, beautifully written. Hope you're well Eileen. Tom
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March 21, 2020 at 3:44 AM
Thanks for the visit, Tom. We've done several collaborations together. Things flow smoothly. Please keep well...
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March 19, 2020 at 2:58 PM
- So beautiful and romantic ... a wonderful collaboration between you and Paul :) - Take care and stay healthy, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 3:37 AM
Thank you, dear. It is always a pleasure to collaborate with Paul Please keep yourself safe
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