Where Love Dances

Let’s meet in the stars
just north of the moon...
Your heart and mine
shimmering, entwined.
Souls melding in time
where dreamers, inclined,
find bliss on higher planes

Let us trip the twilight fancy
two-step with glittering ease
heart to heart, soul to soul
till the sun beckons tomorrow
and our spirits descend
crossing hearts to meet again
in the stars… just north of the moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 26, 2013 at 5:01 PM
Debra, :-) Congrats in Mystic's "FANTASY FANTASY FANTASY" fun contest... God Bless*LINDA
Arowolo Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 11:12 AM
Lovely and splendid piece,Debra...Congrats on your well deserved win.....XOXO...
Guzzi Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 2:40 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gildersleeve Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 12:40 PM
Congrats on your win Debra. A very nice write, warm Smiles, Connie
Mandani Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 11:48 AM
Hey, why didn't you tell me before? We could have combined our trip to the stars. I was going there anyway and you could have hitched a ride on the shooting star on our way back home for nothing!!! Maybe next time.
Eastman Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 11:30 AM
Congratulations on the win.
Ober Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 9:48 AM
This is a beautiful poem. Congratulations!
May Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 7:13 PM
congrats on your win Debra
Patrikar Avatar
September 7, 2012 at 11:13 AM
lovely poem :)
Song Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 6:47 PM
Debra-may I return for another dance amidst the stars? I had to reread this one again bc it awakened something in me when I read it yesterday...You wrote this so brilliantly! Trip the twilight fancy and two-stepping with glittering ease...so sweet these dance moves! :) gwendolen
Song Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 4:04 PM
Deb, I would love to meet someone in the stars just north of the moon! What a galactic kind of date! This is classy poetry and I am lovin every word...u took me to the moon and back in 14 little lines! gwendolen
Johnson Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 11:22 AM
Just one to share reflective gaze. That's all we need to make our days. To tango with our moon struck souls. Dancing beyond Cupids black holes. EH? :)
Kendrick Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 9:17 AM
Very romantic work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Is this creative piece for a contest, if so winner for sure..Sara
Horsman Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 3:26 AM
love this Debra, heart to heart, soul to soul, just like reading your poem .
Palmer Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 6:26 PM
soooo romantic,enjoyed
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 12:29 PM
wow, what a romantic little dance step this is!! I love how you cast the moon and stars in this one, Debra.Very lyrical and romantic.
Wright Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 10:33 PM
Lovely as ever.
Ellison Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 1:03 PM
"just north of the moon' love this phrase! Absolutely love your sweet tender poem, Debra Love and hugs, Jack
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August 31, 2012 at 6:34 AM
Soft and romantic thoughts you have penned, Debra! You have danced to the moon and into my heart with this beauty. I must make a point to dance with my husband this weekend and sprinkle a little stardust! Have a blessed weekend. Hugs, Rhonda
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August 31, 2012 at 5:16 AM
Beautiful poetry, check out the blue moon tonight :) Cindy
Squyres Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 9:53 AM
Plan too, Cindy...should the clouds cooperate !! lol
Andresen Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 2:29 AM
So wonderfully written Debra. Love floods of all banks in this poem. Provides the reader with a warm, fuzzy feeling. At least for me! Thank you. Have a beautiful day Debra. oxox love / / Anne-Lise :)
Squyres Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 9:53 AM
All my romances seem to be in dreams lol....Glad you enjoyed !!
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