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The sun scorched surface of parched stones find reprieve by the shivering bustle of daily chores abound; waterfalls for just a moment. Stillness then collides with every ripple. Purple reflections soon share space and time. 2/27/2017 Riverline contest 8,8,8,8,10,10 syllable count

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Date: 6/12/2017 10:48:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, congratulate on your win, however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 3/20/2017 2:24:00 PM
Just swinging back to congratulate you, Lukas, on a well-deserved win! Hugs. Pandita
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 3/22/2017 7:57:00 AM
Thank you again :)
Date: 3/19/2017 1:58:00 PM
Lukas, this is excellent - I love that first line; pretty unusual for a "river" poem. : )
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 3/20/2017 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Doug... I guess unusual can work sometimes :)
Date: 3/19/2017 8:07:00 AM
Lovely write Lukas, congratulations...
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 3/20/2017 11:04:00 AM
Thx Charlie :)
Date: 3/18/2017 5:30:00 PM
A great write Lukas.
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 3/20/2017 11:04:00 AM
Thank you James!
Date: 3/2/2017 10:42:00 AM
Excellent piece, Lukas! Love the flawless flow and beautiful imagery! A-7 and good luck in the contest. Best wishes. Pandita
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 3/2/2017 6:46:00 PM
Thanks Pandita! You are so kind :)

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