Where Lies True Bliss

Where encased is the secret of bliss Is it encoded in any talisman abstruse? Does it linger unseen on the face of angelic babes Who, with smiles and laughter create such heavenly vibes? Can it be in the eyes of charming belles Who hold the world under their mesmerizing spells? Or is it in the heroic deeds of valiant men Who, on the face of death, undaunted remain? Can we behold it in the brilliance of the rising sun Or in the serene calm of the misty twilight dawn? Does bliss hover on the banks of streaming brooks Or on the heights of snow clad mountain peaks Can it be with fair Venus- Queen of Love Or in the arrows speeding from amorous Cupid's bow Does it glisten in the silvery beams of the shining moon Or in the setting sun's embers of amber and maroon Can it be somewhere in heavens so high Beneath the fluffy clouds quietly gliding neigh Can sweet Paradise be the seat of bliss Where seraphs sing, angels dance and nothing is amiss Nay, it surely resides not in worlds beyond But here on Earth, in the union of hearts with love abound. Dec.27.2021 Resubmitted for 2022 Marathon Mile .No.16 Poetry Contest Sponsor- Mark Toney ~ Placed First~ A Strand (1057) Poetry Contest Sponsor- Brian Strand
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Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 8:57 AM
I really like the last couple of lines. Congrats on this winning entry. Way to go. Sara
Goff Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 6:46 PM
Congrats on your win Valsa! I believe we are but a speck in the Universe, many civilizations have discovered loves eminence following near extinction, as the Russian boy from Mars has revealed...
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 2:50 PM
Just a bliss reading a poetry that nourishes both the mind and the heart! Your avid reader follows the depth of your thoughts to reach the beauty of your insight.. and sips the drops of your words to attain the artistry of your poetry! Dear Valsa, your poetic rendition is truly a deep joy! Stay always blessed with the gift of Beauty! My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2021 at 11:05 AM
what lovely thoughts so poetically expressed, Valsa. Wonderful!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 7:28 PM
A beauty! Yes, something in love brings the attributes of happiness and also suffering in the end. Was it worth it. Yes! But when love is over…oh my
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 10:29 PM
Thanks once again Kim !
Poet Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 7:48 PM
I immensely enjoyed your inner voice all across the rest of the poem. Valsa, the final lines of your poem encapsulate the core of the piece. Your lovely message has a great deal of integrity.
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 1:30 AM
Yes, when hearts are united in love, there is heaven on earth ! Thank you Lasaad for your many visits to my page.
Wolf Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 6:14 PM
I think that you have covered every single possible location of bliss except for one --- that being, of course, the poetry site of one Valsa George! Bravo, Poet! Cheers, Gershon
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 1:28 AM
Wow.... that's a great compliment, Gershon ! Thanks a lot dear friend !
Brown Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 11:59 AM
Valsa, I enjoyed your poem, you have an insight into the human soul, you told a beautiful story. Blessings ~ Debra
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 1:27 AM
Thank you so much Debra for your many visits to my page. Stay blessed and enjoy a New Year of bliss and happiness...
Leffanta Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 10:17 AM
Enjoyed, but wondered if bliss is just being satisfied (for the moment)? Best of luck for the contest! Aloha!
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 1:25 AM
No... no, if there is true love and if people are bonded by it, there will be lasting happiness. Thank you so much Rico
Buhagiar Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 9:18 AM
Brilliant poem as usual. I am always astounded by your imagery and allusions to the planet. Best for a win. Blessings.
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 1:23 AM
Thank you for your appreciation and kind comment Victor !
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 8:03 AM
True! What you search for has always been right by your side. You don’t oft realize it, until you no longer have that love. My dad says, “Kimmy, it all goes too fast.”
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 1:22 AM
When something is very close by our side, we search for it far and near ! Thanks a lot Kim.
Pandit Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 4:45 AM
The ending lines spell the essence of your poem, Valsa. Much truth to your elegant message. Enjoyed the dialogue of your thoughts throughout.
George Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 1:21 AM
Thanks a lot dear Vijay !
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