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Candlelight Dinner In the Black of the Season Dark in the Morning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/1/2012 5:24:00 PM
A late congratulations on this win for a spectacular Haiku. Always, Laura
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Date: 12/24/2008 4:14:00 AM
Dearest HGarvey, This beautiful Haiku touched my very soul. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN IN THIS CONTEST! Warmest wishes to you for the Merriest Christmas and the Happinest New Year Ever. lainie
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Date: 12/24/2008 3:54:00 AM
congratulations on your win.. Constance
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Date: 12/23/2008 8:28:00 PM
HGarvey congratulations on placing in Seashells contest - Great job, MJ
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Date: 12/23/2008 2:49:00 AM
This is such an awesome haiku! congrats on your well deserved win, this has the true haiku quality. very nice, love Kristin
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Date: 12/23/2008 12:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved Third Place Win in seashell's lovely contest. Nigel
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Date: 12/22/2008 11:19:00 PM
Dear Harvey - Congratulations on your WIN in Island's contest! Peace always, John
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Date: 12/22/2008 6:57:00 PM
YIPPEEEEEE YAY!!!!! Warmest congrats on your win in the Winter's Solstice contest! You are awesome! Hugs, Shar xox
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Date: 12/22/2008 6:23:00 PM
HG, Youve done it again! I'm so proud of you. Xliamp..BG
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Date: 12/22/2008 5:56:00 PM
I loved this one sooo much! Well done and well deserving to be in the winning circle!! ~Happy Holidays! ~ Carrie
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Date: 12/18/2008 8:34:00 PM
Nice Haiku...Yes, to answer your question, I am from Oklahoma along with Steve Edmonds, Abe Lopez, and Daniel Neal. We write poetry together. They are great at Haiku's and Senryu's. Master's of the short form to be exact. If you get time check their work out. PS I love rays of light I have stacks of haiku's but people would probably get tired of reading them all. Thanks for your appreciated comments...Raul
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Date: 11/16/2008 10:10:00 AM
Much to think about here. Like the interaction of black/dark adn condlelight/morning. Nice use of just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/16/2008 6:15:00 AM
This is my favorite time of year, and a candlelight dinner sounds absolutely dreamy. Dark in the morning and early evening this time of year, as your poetry suggests. How are you my dear brother? Love your haiku. Love, Shar
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