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Where Is the Day?

Candlelight Dinner
In the Black of the Season
Dark in the Morning

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Laura Breidenthal

January 1, 2012 at 5:24 PM

A late congratulations on this win for a spectacular Haiku. Always, Laura

Elaine George

December 24, 2008 at 4:14 AM

Dearest HGarvey, This beautiful Haiku touched my very soul. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN IN THIS CONTEST! Warmest wishes to you for the Merriest Christmas and the Happinest New Year Ever. lainie

Constance La France

December 24, 2008 at 3:54 AM

congratulations on your win.. Constance

Michael Jordan

December 23, 2008 at 8:28 PM

HGarvey congratulations on placing in Seashells contest - Great job, MJ

Kristin Reynolds

December 23, 2008 at 2:49 AM

This is such an awesome haiku! congrats on your well deserved win, this has the true haiku quality. very nice, love Kristin

Nigel Fawcett

December 23, 2008 at 12:26 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved Third Place Win in seashell's lovely contest. Nigel

John Heck

December 22, 2008 at 11:19 PM

Dear Harvey - Congratulations on your WIN in Island's contest! Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

December 22, 2008 at 6:57 PM

YIPPEEEEEE YAY!!!!! Warmest congrats on your win in the Winter's Solstice contest! You are awesome! Hugs, Shar xox

Barbara Gorelick

December 22, 2008 at 6:23 PM

HG, Youve done it again! I'm so proud of you. Xliamp..BG

Carrie Richards

December 22, 2008 at 5:56 PM

I loved this one sooo much! Well done and well deserving to be in the winning circle!! ~Happy Holidays! ~ Carrie

Raul Moreno

December 18, 2008 at 8:34 PM

Nice Haiku...Yes, to answer your question, I am from Oklahoma along with Steve Edmonds, Abe Lopez, and Daniel Neal. We write poetry together. They are great at Haiku's and Senryu's. Master's of the short form to be exact. If you get time check their work out. PS I love rays of light I have stacks of haiku's but people would probably get tired of reading them all. Thanks for your appreciated comments...Raul

November 16, 2008 at 10:10 AM

Much to think about here. Like the interaction of black/dark adn condlelight/morning. Nice use of just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen

Sharon Winter

November 16, 2008 at 6:15 AM

This is my favorite time of year, and a candlelight dinner sounds absolutely dreamy. Dark in the morning and early evening this time of year, as your poetry suggests. How are you my dear brother? Love your haiku. Love, Shar

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