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Where Have They Gone - Those Days of Old


Where have they gone, those days of old:
   their melody- simple and sweet;
a blending of the joys that hold
   warm thoughts in memories' retreat.

Their melody- simple and sweet:
   fires burning, loved ones gathered near;
warm thoughts in memories' retreat-
   that peace that hovered to hold dear.

Fires burning, loved ones gathered near; 
   chores done, the evening shared with zest.
That peace that hovered to hold dear
   life's humble ways and means as best.

Chores done, the evening shared with zest.
   A blending of the joys that hold
life's humble ways and means as best.
   Where have they gone, those days of old?


March 22, 2016

Contest: Pantoum- Old Or New
Sponsor: Joseph May

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May Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 9:45 AM
We cherish those good old days, Congrats on your win Sandra, Wonderful write
Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 8:41 PM
Memories kept burning in the heart! Congrats, Sandra!
Michelle Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 1:35 PM
Congratulations on your fourth place win in my rhyme battle contest, well deserved! Love, Juli-Michelle
Hicks Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:35 PM
I can see why this was one of the top pantoums, Sandra. It's very impressive the way you write this, and I hardly even notice the repeating lines. Your sentimentality tugs on the heart strings ... where they have gone? :( :) --- it's a smile-frown kinda moment.
Haight Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 3:43 PM
Thank you, Tim, for your encouraging and uplifting comments! I am pleased that you like it! Thanks again, Sandra
Raven Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Always your words seem to paint such gentle pictures . They gently flow down the page. Somehow the gentle way you write always brings me an inner peace. The images flow through the mind and this becomes a wonderful Pantoum. An excellent Pantoum Sandra. It goes into my faves and is a definite seven. Hugs....Mike. XX
Haight Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 3:44 PM
Thank you once again, Mike, for your lovely comments and compliments. I am honored to receive such wonderful support from you, and I appreciate the fave and seven so much. Thanks again, dear friend! Sandra
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April 6, 2016 at 9:58 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~
Haight Avatar
April 8, 2016 at 3:45 PM
Thank you so much, Linda. Hugs, Sandra
Quigley Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 6:17 AM
Beautiful and poignant. Awesome write!
Haight Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 7:26 PM
Thank you very much, Tom. Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 5:28 AM
Great work Sandra.. no wonder top podium.. big congrats!
Haight Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 7:25 PM
Thank you again, Dr. Upma. I appreciate your support. Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:46 PM
I knew there was a reason I liked this one, congratulations Sandra...
Haight Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 7:24 PM
Thank you, Charlie. I am pleased that you like it. Sandra
Scars Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 5:57 PM
Sandra, a wonderful poem...congrats on your top placement in the contest! :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 7:24 PM
Thank you very much, Laura. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your win Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 7:23 PM
Thank you, Jan. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Sandra, this is so beautifully penned, you did amazing with the pantoum, and I am loving this 7 ~
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Thank you so much, BW, for your supportive comment and the 7! I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Sathasivam Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 3:08 AM
Excellent. Well penned with wonderful memories. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Thank you so much, Rave. Appreciate your visit! Sandra
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 12:43 PM
An absolute joy to read Sandra wonderful memories and a super image which really complements your poem:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Thank you so much, Jan. Glad you like it. Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 11:25 AM
Good job Sandra, Good luck in the contest
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Thank you, Charlie. Sandra
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