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Where Have They Gone?

Where has the sun gone? With its bright rays spreading warmth Opening blossoms. Where has the breeze gone? That spreads the moisture they need Their thirst to appease. Where has the bird gone? That spreads good cheers all around When spring comes about. Where has my love gone? That felt so close for a while In the mist, it hides. Where have they all gone? The mist will lift and reveal What I have to see. By CarolineCécile, Copyright © 08.23.09

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/5/2011 7:28:00 PM
Interesting questions to ponder about. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/1/2011 11:46:00 AM
The poet seems to be suffering depression, I hope just temporarily. The mist will lift, I'm sure. Congrats on the selection. Love daver
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Date: 10/31/2011 4:48:00 PM
Caroline, Congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. take care and have yourself a safe and fun Halloween night,..p.d.
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Date: 10/31/2011 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserving poetry being featured this week Caroline. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2011 9:46:00 AM
Congrats Caroline on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful write to share with luv..
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Date: 9/19/2009 6:30:00 AM
nicely penned, that's the way I felt when I wrote "current float the Love"
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Date: 8/29/2009 8:38:00 PM
pensive, beautiful! Caroline! jim
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Date: 8/28/2009 3:42:00 PM
The mist will lift, and you will see - the wonderful things waiting for thee. As the mist arises so do your eyes, and standing in front of you - the ultimate surprise... excellent poem Caroline>>James
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Date: 8/28/2009 2:46:00 PM
Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/27/2009 4:44:00 AM
This is downright beautiful poetry Caroline. Thank you for sharing it today. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2009 10:37:00 PM
Once again, Caroline, your poetry is beautiful. DAS-J
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Date: 8/26/2009 9:02:00 PM
Hi Caroline. "The mist will lift and reveal What I have to see." - I hope you'll see a true love carressed by sunrays, accompanied by lovebirds'songs in a warm breeze of dreams...Thank you Caroline for your comment on my "Solo". You are sooo right in your analysis...Love, Iolanda
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