Where Freedom Finds the Fire

Recovery reigned

beyond lure and fire and ice

then

to baptismal pool.


Sponsor: Jusin Bordner
Contest Name:  "Where Freedom Finds The Fire"
Deadline: 4/26/16

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Lenny Gazbowski

April 12, 2016 at 11:46 PM

Iris, an enchanting and esoteric haiku, so lovely, so deep.

Lenny Gazbowski

April 15, 2016 at 3:01 PM

And you also Iris :-)

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

April 15, 2016 at 8:15 AM

Thanks Lenny. finding my way to you. Have a wonderful weekend.

Timothy Hicks

April 8, 2016 at 1:44 AM

You thought outside the box with this contest, Iris. It's the fire of recovery that sparks the soul to salvation! Justin doesn't pick too many winners (only 3 and the rest are Honorable Mentions), but I love participating in them nonetheless because the themes are always very vague, it gets your mind going. I liked your brevity ... a lot of thought in few words.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

April 8, 2016 at 11:14 AM

Thanks Timo. I C U wrote a winner for water...

Paul Callus

April 6, 2016 at 9:22 AM

This is a lovely creative haiku, Iris; having said that, I have the feeling that Justin would be looking out for longer writes; of course I could be wrong! ~ Regards // paul

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

April 7, 2016 at 8:24 AM

Okay, Paul. Perhaps so, but it's too late for more, yes. I must check.