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Written 1st, July, 2026 for Where do teardrops go? Poetry Contest sponsored by John Lawless.

 

Tears unshed are not tears avoided; they are tears that carve hidden rivers of sorrow within.” 

   - Dr. Nitin Chopra

Where Do Teardrops Go?

They slip beyond the reach of sight,
where thought begins to lose its frame,
into the fabric of the air,
returning softly out of light,
to where no mind can speak their name,
releasing secrets hidden there. 

They linger briefly on the face,
then leave what could not yet be said,
caught in the corner of a sleeve,
as something passes from its place,
until the self moves on instead,
To teach a heavy heart to breathe. 

They fall to ground or disappear,
absorbed in surfaces unknown,
drawn into dust or skin or rain,
then fade beyond our sense of here,
as time unthreads what it has known,
A cold reminder of the stain. 

They surface later, undefined,
as memory reshapes their role,
called grief or joy by shifting voice,
yet never fixed within the mind,
for meaning cannot keep them whole,
Driven by laws, and not by choice. 

They alter what the body keeps,
a breath released, a slowing chest,
a subtle shift in inner weight,
so something quiet shifts and seeps,
toward what it is to come to rest,
And forgives the heart its heavy state.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Daub Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 9:20 PM
Dear Allison, I do not dare to remark on structure, or style, or the level of artistic skill regarding Where Do Teardrops Go. You are truly a remarkable poet and I am honored to mark you as a poet that I follow. My comment about this poem focuses on the deep, deep spirit of this piece. I may have mentioned that my wife last Christmas morning. I refer to this because the tears I shed then, and shed now are the essence of your piece. I am blessed to have read this poem — because it takes me across the journey of my tears, and distills my tears to blessed and holy waters. Thank you, thank you. Frank Daub
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 12:39 AM
Thank you for letting me know how my poem has helped you.🌹⭐
Dright Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 12:19 PM
I never wondered where did teardrops go, so now I know. (Smile) Beautifully written. And thank you for all your beautiful comments on my poetry.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 3:10 PM
Thank for your visit. Glad my poetry taught you something new.😄
Dutta Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 9:27 AM
Each stanza shows your poetic approach. I’m charmed. Blessings
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 4:44 PM
Thank you Anisha ❤️
Pequignot Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 9:25 PM
I needed to see this poem to be honest when I posted mine earlier it was on a simple whim drawn out by the overwhelming pressure I'm feeling at home because I kept telling my family I'm ok but honestly I'm not right now this poem helped me see that it's ok I'm not just as long as I have the strength to continue forward despite it
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 21, 2026 at 10:14 PM
I am glad this verse found you. Sometimes it is actually stronger to admit we are NOT ok.❤️
The Poet Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 5:05 PM
'To teach a heavy heart to breathe'- Never thought of a 'tear' in the manner you penned it here. Otherwise, this is a lovely piece. Congratulations on your win🥂. Certainly nailed it.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 5:22 PM
Thank Mwila The Poet, your visit and comment are greatly appreciated.💧
Felsch Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 7:36 AM
teardrops.....God's gift to us to wash away the hurt, the hurt from the bottom of the well. The pit that seems to never empty.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 12:48 PM
Thank you.❤️💧
Stetson Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 12:07 PM
Admiration well deserved. You certainly are prolific, my Dear.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 3:19 PM
Thank you John for visiting.❤️
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 4:20 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in the contest. Way to go. 👍. Sara K.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 4:25 PM
Thank you Sara. An interesting thought, where do teardrops go.😿💧
Poet Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 10:53 AM
There is such hidden beauty in tears, as you so beautifully depict in your poem, Alison.  Back with Congratulations on your win.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 2:29 PM
Much appreciated Sotto❤️
bard Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 1:39 PM
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 2:18 PM
Thank you Douglas.❤️
bard Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 1:40 PM
Good day Alison A well deserved placing for this poem Blessings Douglas😍
Anaya Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 1:01 PM
Whoa, is this POTD? I've never seen such a long list of poets comments before this, ha.😊 Congratulations on your win, 🙌Alison, you killed it my dear. Liked & faved
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 2:17 PM
Just seems to have resonated with many. Thank you for your comment❤️
Andrews Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 6:53 PM
Just beautiful, Alison. I get something extra from this piece each time I read it. Cheers, Paul.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 7:33 PM
Thank you Paul, your comment warms my soul.
Archer Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 2:31 PM
Very well done, Alison. I love the journey I just went on. Beautiful work.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 3:36 PM
Thank you for coming on the ride.
Elliott Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 11:04 AM
Hi Alison, such a resounding FAV. Stunningly beauteous. Blessings & Hugs :)
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 3:36 PM
Thank you Regina.
George Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 11:55 PM
Great flow, powerful emotions and clever rhymes. A beautiful entry for the contest. All the best, Alison.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 12:07 AM
Thank you Valsa
Doute  Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 8:13 AM
I wish I could write like this. You blow my mind with the chaos, and then calm it with a shot of reason. I love it.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 4:11 PM
Thank you Jim for visiting my poetry.
Guptar Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 12:51 AM
A lovely poem flowing fluidly, well carved with beautiful imagery. Wish you all the best in the contest.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 3, 2026 at 12:59 AM
Thank you Krishnanand Guptar happy you liked it.
Onclaud Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 9:41 PM
impeccably relayed without having to mention teardrops within the lines!
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 9:58 PM
You know I hadn't realised that. I guess I was so intent on describing using teardrops wasn't necessary.
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 8:07 PM
Every stanza truly a gem into and unto itself. Bravo!
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 9:57 PM
Thank you so much Gershon
Lowe Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 8:00 AM
Profound, Alison. I particularly loved the "allegorical tearing" in the last stanza of this beautiful flowing poem. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love, M'Lowe.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 2:33 PM
Your comment almost brought me to tears thank you.
Radice Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 6:41 AM
An excellent write Alison, the best I've read of your work to date. Much thought and skill has gone into writing this. Cheers - Gary
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 2:31 PM
Thank you Gary, I do take a while to write some of these.
Poet Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 2:16 AM
Alison, your poem successfully conveys a profound sense of feeling. Your phrasing and imagery are consistently superb—potentially with a consistent structure.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 2:27 AM
Thank you Sotto your comment is most appreciated.
Dutta Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 9:45 PM
VERY VERY NICE. I'm simply charmed. I admire. You are a great poet . Blessings always.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 10:25 PM
Thank you so much Anisha. I write from my heart.
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 7:41 PM
Great writing, Alison. One of the best I have seen in this contest. So beautifully expressed
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 8:43 PM
Thank you Andrea for your kind words.
Parker Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 7:20 PM
deeply profound, dear poet...my sense is those who know about inner feelings that release tears whether from pain or happiness are able to write poetry like this...really nice a Fav
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 1, 2026 at 8:42 PM
Thank you Frederic your words and fav warm my soul.
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