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Where Crimson Bleeds Its Rose

Under a half moon He becomes my dream A secret uncloaked Emotion unveiled A mystery revealed Existence of warmth between subconscious and implicit knowledge And it is there... `neath the soft spot of my heart where crimson bleeds its velvet upon his bare breath Its there where my blushed lips lose their virginity Where my fair cheeks suffused with rosy glow It is there where fiery needs are fulfilled Fervent desires scorched Candlelit pleasures beheld It is there where alluring visions embrace my suppressed memory and take over this barren soul As his ardent voice call in an enticing whisper in a unique accent into my left ear My love~Mi amor That is the preserved moment when my unwholiness becomes whole That is the moment those glancing eyes capture my own Only until... Mr sandman leaves behind wet proposals on dry soil Early mist envelops the bridge Aurora rises in new awakening Last zephyr breeze fades away and once again He is gone,gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/11/2015 6:23:00 AM
Charmaine, an enchanting, magical, passionate write, 7, and congratulations on have it chosen as a Feature Poem this week.
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:33:00 AM
Charmaine :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love
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Date: 10/3/2014 2:11:00 PM
Hi, Charmaine, After that intriguing title, I knew I had to read your sensuous, romantic dream poem! Beautifully written!
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Date: 9/24/2014 4:28:00 PM
Powerful emotions all the way, loved fusion fuelled, then empty. Dreamy, now dreamt, gone. Poetry, only as you can do 'Maltese Maiden' - James :)
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Date: 9/24/2014 2:26:00 PM
This is beautiful and captivating, Charm! Had the pleasure of reading it more than once, and each time it sounds even better! It's going to my faves. // paul
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Date: 9/23/2014 10:36:00 PM
Dear Charmaine. You have the ability to up the bar for all of us - you make me want to strive higher and better - this is what talent does! Daniel.
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Date: 9/23/2014 5:04:00 PM
Yike what a sad ending!! It's OK I can go back into the dream with you little one. Light & Love
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Date: 9/17/2014 2:23:00 PM
I needed my fix. Had to drop in again. Still a seven plus.
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Date: 9/17/2014 11:29:00 AM
charms, you really know what exotic means.. delightfully sensuous and languid.... wow!.. huggs
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 9/17/2014 11:31:00 AM
cheers for the POTD award!
Date: 9/15/2014 2:50:00 PM
truly beautifully painted excellent piece of writing i tip my hat on this one
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Date: 9/15/2014 9:07:00 AM
Any comment I could make, I am afraid, it could only subtract from the astonishing beauty of this mesmerizing writing, dear Charmaine!
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Date: 9/14/2014 8:29:00 PM
A gem from start to magnificent finish... Congrats on this great poem being chosen as the POD!!!
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Date: 9/14/2014 7:18:00 PM
I couldn't stop reading waiting for the last verse, deep in emotions and love, it took me away into my world of fantasy. thank you so much for this exceptional write hugs
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Date: 9/14/2014 12:39:00 PM
Excellent write. I love it. Happy writing. With love and prayers and God bless you, Gina
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/14/2014 4:20:00 PM
Thanks Gina : )
Date: 9/14/2014 11:29:00 AM
stunning write Charmaine - well deserved choice for poem of the day - congrats:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/14/2014 4:21:00 PM
Thanks sweet Jan : )
Date: 9/14/2014 9:59:00 AM
Congrats sweetie on POD....hugs
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/14/2014 4:23:00 PM
Hi Tim,thanks so much : )
Date: 9/14/2014 8:30:00 AM
Grats on poem of the day girl you rock :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/14/2014 4:25:00 PM
Tnks so much Cas : )
Date: 9/14/2014 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations, I see this was poem of the day. For some reason I imagined Bocheli signing in the background as I read this amazing piece. Outstanding Charmaine.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/14/2014 4:34:00 PM
The prayer not my prayer i think
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/14/2014 4:30:00 PM
I looove Andrea Boccelli especially his song- 'Con te partiro',and 'my prsyer-with Celine Dion..Thanks Richard : )
Date: 9/14/2014 8:06:00 AM
I loved it the first two times though I read it several times on both visits. Now I am here to gloat. I was right this poem is number one. POEM OF THE DAY. So happy on this perfect choice. CONGRATULATIONS!!!!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/14/2014 4:37:00 PM
MuchMuch appreciatrd Maurice ,thankyou so much : )
Date: 9/14/2014 6:28:00 AM
- Beautifully written, congratulations on the poem of the day !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/14/2014 4:39:00 PM
Thanks so much sweety
Date: 9/14/2014 1:03:00 AM
Congratulations on the poem of the day. Verlena
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/14/2014 4:43:00 PM
Tnks so much : )
Date: 9/13/2014 6:37:00 PM
i dropped in to read all the comments and read this gem again. added it to my faves to make it easier to come back too.
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Date: 9/13/2014 3:52:00 PM
wow, a languid melody filled with immense feelings and images, charms... I love how this flows; great write!.. huggs
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/14/2014 4:45:00 PM
Thanks dear Nette: )
Date: 9/13/2014 9:01:00 AM
The ardor in your love poems, leaves one breathless, as always, dear Charmaine....
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/14/2014 4:41:00 PM
Tnks my dear Carrie : )
Date: 9/13/2014 8:58:00 AM
where crimson bleeds its velvet...loved this...truly an amazing flowing of emotions of wanton need...a fav....hugs Tim
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