Where Crimson Bleeds Its Rose

Under a half moon He becomes my dream A secret uncloaked Emotion unveiled A mystery revealed Existence of warmth between subconscious and implicit knowledge And it is there... `neath the soft spot of my heart where crimson bleeds its velvet upon his bare breath Its there where my blushed lips lose their virginity Where my fair cheeks suffused with rosy glow It is there where fiery needs are fulfilled Fervent desires scorched Candlelit pleasures beheld It is there where alluring visions embrace my suppressed memory and take over this barren soul As his ardent voice call in an enticing whisper in a unique accent into my left ear My love~Mi amor That is the preserved moment when my unwholiness becomes whole That is the moment those glancing eyes capture my own Only until... Mr sandman leaves behind wet proposals on dry soil Early mist envelops the bridge Aurora rises in new awakening Last zephyr breeze fades away and once again He is gone,gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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La France Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 6:23 AM
Charmaine, an enchanting, magical, passionate write, 7, and congratulations on have it chosen as a Feature Poem this week.
A  Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 10:33 AM
Charmaine :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love
Gifford Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 2:11 PM
Hi, Charmaine, After that intriguing title, I knew I had to read your sensuous, romantic dream poem! Beautifully written!
Fraser Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 4:28 PM
Powerful emotions all the way, loved fusion fuelled, then empty. Dreamy, now dreamt, gone. Poetry, only as you can do 'Maltese Maiden' - James :)
Callus Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 2:26 PM
This is beautiful and captivating, Charm! Had the pleasure of reading it more than once, and each time it sounds even better! It's going to my faves. // paul
Human Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 10:36 PM
Dear Charmaine. You have the ability to up the bar for all of us - you make me want to strive higher and better - this is what talent does! Daniel.
Guzzi Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 5:04 PM
Yike what a sad ending!! It's OK I can go back into the dream with you little one. Light & Love
Yvonne Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 2:23 PM
I needed my fix. Had to drop in again. Still a seven plus.
Onclaud Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 11:29 AM
charms, you really know what exotic means.. delightfully sensuous and languid.... wow!.. huggs
Onclaud Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 11:31 AM
cheers for the POTD award!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 2:50 PM
truly beautifully painted excellent piece of writing i tip my hat on this one
Trifiatis Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 9:07 AM
Any comment I could make, I am afraid, it could only subtract from the astonishing beauty of this mesmerizing writing, dear Charmaine!
Lindley Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 8:29 PM
A gem from start to magnificent finish... Congrats on this great poem being chosen as the POD!!!
Franceschini Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 7:18 PM
I couldn't stop reading waiting for the last verse, deep in emotions and love, it took me away into my world of fantasy. thank you so much for this exceptional write hugs
Mcintosh Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 12:39 PM
Excellent write. I love it. Happy writing. With love and prayers and God bless you, Gina
Chircop Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 4:20 PM
Thanks Gina : )
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 11:29 AM
stunning write Charmaine - well deserved choice for poem of the day - congrats:-) hugs Jan xxx
Chircop Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Thanks sweet Jan : )
Smith Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 9:59 AM
Congrats sweetie on POD....hugs
Chircop Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 4:23 PM
Hi Tim,thanks so much : )
Nance Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 8:30 AM
Grats on poem of the day girl you rock :)
Chircop Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 4:25 PM
Tnks so much Cas : )
Lamoureux Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations, I see this was poem of the day. For some reason I imagined Bocheli signing in the background as I read this amazing piece. Outstanding Charmaine.
Chircop Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 4:34 PM
The prayer not my prayer i think
Chircop Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 4:30 PM
I looove Andrea Boccelli especially his song- 'Con te partiro',and 'my prsyer-with Celine Dion..Thanks Richard : )
Yvonne Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 8:06 AM
I loved it the first two times though I read it several times on both visits. Now I am here to gloat. I was right this poem is number one. POEM OF THE DAY. So happy on this perfect choice. CONGRATULATIONS!!!!
Chircop Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 4:37 PM
MuchMuch appreciatrd Maurice ,thankyou so much : )
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 6:28 AM
- Beautifully written, congratulations on the poem of the day !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Chircop Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 4:39 PM
Thanks so much sweety
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September 14, 2014 at 1:03 AM
Congratulations on the poem of the day. Verlena
Chircop Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 4:43 PM
Tnks so much : )
Yvonne Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 6:37 PM
i dropped in to read all the comments and read this gem again. added it to my faves to make it easier to come back too.
Onclaud Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 3:52 PM
wow, a languid melody filled with immense feelings and images, charms... I love how this flows; great write!.. huggs
Chircop Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 4:45 PM
Thanks dear Nette: )
Richards Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 9:01 AM
The ardor in your love poems, leaves one breathless, as always, dear Charmaine....
Chircop Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 4:41 PM
Tnks my dear Carrie : )
Smith Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 8:58 AM
where crimson bleeds its velvet...loved this...truly an amazing flowing of emotions of wanton need...a fav....hugs Tim
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