Where Blossoms Bloom

I have tripped and fallen into the lonely abyss on occasions,
walked with rain as strangers passed me by, just like the song.
For loneliness is not the domain of the young or poets solemn, 
but a pitfall on the path as we savour life’s amazing adventure.
What cheers you up is but in the opening of an eye, inner or Optec,
Seasons flow and ebb, rage and calm, twist, turn blaze and fade.
And there, waiting for the unseeing to graze upon and freshly taste.
Not sulk in black selfish despair or rage at the happiness of others.
But enjoy the natural wonders about you; be enraptured by its awe,
Fertilise your senses, cultivate your heart. Let nature Sheppard you
towards contentment’s deep well, where blossoms bloom the mind. 


S.de B   2012-08-01

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/6/2013 11:49:00 AM
Very. Beautiful poem. Thank you for reading mine!
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 7/9/2013 1:49:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
Date: 5/30/2013 8:12:00 PM
sweet, nice and very cute. blooming words ~SKAT~
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/31/2013 6:55:00 AM
Thanks for taking the time to read and leaving a comment.
Date: 5/23/2013 3:31:00 AM
Oh yes i strongly believe people shudnt rage at other's hapiness. Dis is wondrous in imagery. Do read mine too esp my newest.
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Date: 5/25/2013 3:59:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I look forward to reading your work.
Date: 5/22/2013 4:39:00 PM
Very pretty and creative. Congratulations on your big win. Thank you for stopping by with comments. Love, Joyce
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Seosamh De Burca
Date: 5/25/2013 3:58:00 PM
Thank you so much. I enjoy reading your poems.
Date: 5/21/2013 10:19:00 PM
A wonderful message in this creative poem. love phyl
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Date: 5/22/2013 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Phyl for reading and your kind comment.
Date: 5/21/2013 10:38:00 AM
So much truth and wisdom among these few words..
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Date: 5/21/2013 6:59:00 PM
Hi Thanks for commenting and reading my poem.
Date: 5/18/2013 2:52:00 PM
Unique, creative, and expressive work that you have penned in this one..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for your visit to my work..Your comments were uplfiting..Sara
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Date: 5/19/2013 2:08:00 PM
Hi, thank you for leaving such a kind comment and taking the time to read my poem.
Date: 5/18/2013 10:37:00 AM
A very unique write. The wording was wonderful. The flow of thoughts great.
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Date: 5/19/2013 2:07:00 PM
Hi, thank you for reading my poem and taking the time to write a generous comment.
Date: 5/18/2013 12:23:00 AM
a sensational message inside your poetry!
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Date: 5/19/2013 2:05:00 PM
Hi, Thank you for reading my poem and taking the time to leave a comment.
Date: 5/17/2013 4:16:00 PM
Woooooof... This is too much!! I had to read it thrice to come up with all of the embedded meanings of this enchanting write. Excellent job!!
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Date: 5/19/2013 2:04:00 PM
Hi, thanks for your kind comment and reading my poem.
Date: 5/17/2013 4:34:00 AM
A deep thought poem having nature as its guide! Wonderfully written touching heart and mind! Thank you!
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Date: 5/19/2013 2:03:00 PM
Hi, thanks for reading my poem and your kind comment.
Date: 5/16/2013 3:18:00 PM
This is quite intense & atmospheric. I really like how this ended. Excellent work!
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Date: 5/19/2013 2:02:00 PM
Hi and thanks for taking the time to read my poem and leaving generous comment.
Date: 5/16/2013 3:01:00 PM
- It is deep, beautiful and true - Really well written. - Thank you for visiting my poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/19/2013 2:01:00 PM
Hi and thanks for commenting and reading my poem.
Date: 5/16/2013 11:06:00 AM
Hi, Burca, Nice creation which bloomed sleeping hearts. I really enjoyed ‘Where Blossoms Bloom' I feel the wordings ('But enjoy the natural wonders about you; be enraptured by its awe, Fertilise your senses, cultivate your heart)' are sharp and inspiring to touch the sleeping hearts of readers.!!
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Date: 5/19/2013 2:00:00 PM
Hi and thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and write a comment.
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