Where Angels Traverse

Cupid wrote their love story
With a quill from an angel’s wing
In an Astral realm, to traverse
through celestial skies.
An Enterprise that belonged to Angel’s
with anger now, she exercised a most 
pernicious influence over him 
and locked him up in a cloud
as she stood sentry
with a blemish of a missing quill.

An elegant angular visage of an Angel
Who mocked Cupid’s very vision
Till his arrow struck with a flash of light
To Dampen the Angels resolve
And allow love to be blessed
With showers from open skies.

22.10.2020
‘Eight word Challenge 11’
Words: Dampen, Blemish, Pernicious, Traverse, Visage, Sentry, Astral, Enterprise.
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Pandit Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Congrats Carol on your win in John's contest.
Mitra Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 7:15 AM
Thanks Vijay.....much appreciated.
Hamilton Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 12:32 PM
Thanks for your entry Carol, congrats on placing!
Mitra Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 7:14 AM
Thanks John....much appreciated.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 12:31 PM
Hello Carol Mitra, Cupid did a good job to change the Angel's thoughts. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Hello Carol, the Cupid should be proud. Enjoy your day my friend.
Mitra Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 5:55 PM
Indeed he did...Thanks Darlene:)
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