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Where Angels Traverse

Cupid wrote their love story With a quill from an angel’s wing In an Astral realm, to traverse through celestial skies. An Enterprise that belonged to Angel’s with anger now, she exercised a most pernicious influence over him and locked him up in a cloud as she stood sentry with a blemish of a missing quill. An elegant angular visage of an Angel Who mocked Cupid’s very vision Till his arrow struck with a flash of light To Dampen the Angels resolve And allow love to be blessed With showers from open skies. 22.10.2020 ‘Eight word Challenge 11’ Words: Dampen, Blemish, Pernicious, Traverse, Visage, Sentry, Astral, Enterprise.

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Date: 11/16/2020 6:26:00 AM
Congrats Carol on your win in John's contest.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 11/16/2020 7:15:00 AM
Thanks Vijay.....much appreciated.
Date: 11/14/2020 12:32:00 PM
Thanks for your entry Carol, congrats on placing!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 11/16/2020 7:14:00 AM
Thanks John....much appreciated.
Date: 10/22/2020 12:31:00 PM
Hello Carol Mitra, Cupid did a good job to change the Angel's thoughts. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/23/2020 10:14:00 AM
Hello Carol, the Cupid should be proud. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 10/22/2020 5:55:00 PM
Indeed he did...Thanks Darlene:)

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