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Where Angels Fly (Haiku)

The sunset colours a vast view of the heavens, where evening clouds fly

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Date: 11/13/2008 11:10:00 AM

Waht a beautiful vision captured in just three lines. The second line is my favorite. This poem has such a peaceful feel to it. Thank you for sharing it with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 8/26/2008 5:15:00 AM

This is in perfect form and it provides such lovely imagery for the reader. I love the title of this. Have a great day. Michael

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/24/2008 8:12:00 PM

Beautiful short poem. And you stuck to 5-7-5. Well done! Peace Matthew Anish

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/23/2008 1:26:00 PM

Just lovely great imagery! Laura

Heidie Buys

Date: 8/22/2008 4:21:00 PM

This brings to mind so many beautiful sunsets. Lovely atmosphere and very vivid. Well done. Love Heidie

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/22/2008 9:54:00 AM

Adell I just loved this poem - very blessed like the poetess who wrote it

Angelia Dawson

Date: 8/21/2008 2:23:00 PM

it is beauitful i really joy to read

James Foulk

Date: 8/21/2008 12:43:00 PM

a very beautiful Haiku. enjoyed it. thank you for reading my another solider fell today and for your comment

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/21/2008 7:19:00 AM

An inspiring vision! Beautiful haiku. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/21/2008 6:10:00 AM

What a lovely picture you painted!....Blessings....Carrie