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Where Am I

A new world. My mind is clear. I open my eyes as I realize tiny bright twinkling stars above.I raise my self off the ground. The ground made of orange sand and dirt nothing similar to earth. I am not breathing, but I am still alive, With no air going up my nostrils how do I survive. The land so warm, and vacant,standing amidst this new world, I was naked,I walked ahead,crowned with confusion. Where am I? Who am I and what am I doing here? These questions followed with a single tear. All around me was eccentric growth. Yellow plants with blue leaves, crystals hanging from each leaf. Trees made of light blinding my sight hanging from the branches, pieces of clouds complimenting the light, birds made of stone and diamonds. Their wings made of rose peddles and onyx. A purple substance flowing and glowing with effulgence. I followed the stream. Ahead I saw a city agleam with lights. Houses lifted by fragments of bright light,houses made of steel and green glass, blinking red lights,tunnels made of light leading to the unknown.The only thing known is I want to go home. To be continued...

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Date: 5/3/2012 3:49:00 PM
This is good and I like it. It seems to me that you are having a dream. I hope you wake up. Lucilla
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Date: 5/3/2012 1:31:00 PM
Yikes..This was a great write..I was feeling you all the way!!!
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Date: 5/2/2012 5:55:00 PM
im feeling the scenery in this poem man.
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Date: 5/2/2012 3:59:00 PM
You landed on earth, three days after acid. You once were so tall, but now feel so flacid. Alice came home but never returned. An empty prophecy was all that she learned.
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