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Where a Poem Has a Smell

Along the upper estuary, 
boats laid beached on mud 
like whales you see
on news clips stranded
helpless in the drained shallows
of a low tide. These boats 
too were out of their natural world 
of water and easy float, 
their freedom was the distance 
swung on the arc of a rope.

We would clamber up their listing
hulls and into the ribbed
bellies of the bigger boats, 
huddle in the dank, 
fish foul air of cabins
and turn wheels hard to port.
They were the holds loaded
with the cargoes of our childhood.

Later, there was a sad absence 
occupying the helm, neglect 
peeling the paint and seeding 
rot into weathered timber. 
They stunk of decay.
Most boats were abandoned, 
fastened for years
to the monotony of tides,
sentenced for life
to lift and fall on the same spot
or sink and be broken up.

And yet they remain anchor points
to what is real, positioned 
as it were in a world where things
can be felt, have substance 
and assume a shape 
mirrored in your mind.
They float secure 
on a sea of nothingness whose
sterile depths beckon and beguile 
and would claim poetry
to feed the ethereal swans 
of Stephane Mallarme.
Here is where a poem 
has a smell as well 
as make you feel and think 
without recourse to meaning,
becoming mere magic.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/29/2023 5:57:00 AM
The kind of poetry you don't want to end, Paul. Great writing. i've smelled rotting flat bottom boats and yeah, they stink. Funny sometimes those little inconsequential things that ground us. That familiar starting point. Good stuff mate:)
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/29/2023 6:16:00 AM
So kind with yr comments Daniel. Pleased that it struck a common note. God I miss those days, a real connection to raw life, smells, mud, hours of exploration. No wonder they stick in memory. Honoured with term "mate" a good old Aussie term of endearment. I return the compliment, thanks mate.

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