When Your Young Life Catches You Flat Footed

When Your Young Life Catches You Flat Footed

BarBQ, potato chips Mountain Dew and Watermelon pie
It was a huge celebration of friends on the Fourth of July
There was Tammy with beautiful hair and those dark tanned legs
And Patricia looking so sexy, appetizing, made a soul want to beg
Then ravishing Connie, O, me my, my, those sweet sexy lips
Last but not least there was Helen, that made Greeks launch those ships
Four very beautiful women and each one I had once dated
I wonder if the day would be a curse that was indeed ill Fated
And each one of them was surely there to see little ole me
I did not know whether to be very glad or so swiftly flee
My new wife looked at me, gave me that "you better behave stare"
I was immediately wishing these feet to rush me out of there 
What to do next, what to say, damn it, I had not a clue
I was so deeply perplexed, and thus into the house I flew
"Man o man", the pressure on my heart surely hit me damn hard
Like a wise man, I went and hid in my library, writing like a Bard.

Robert J. Lindley, 
16 verse Narrative

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 8/26/2023 8:53:00 PM
Life can be so crazy!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/30/2023 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, my good friend. I am sorry that I am so late seeing this fine comment. Yes, crazy life was a norm for me from the age of 17 up until 34. My young years were full of life and its many adventures. God bless you..
Date: 8/25/2023 4:55:00 AM
Oh my goodness, this sonnet is absolutely breathtaking! It beautifully captures the essence of a vibrant, youthful spirit during the early stages of life. The way you skillfully incorporate vivid and captivating descriptions is truly mesmerizing. It's truly a delightful poem, Robert.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/25/2023 6:57:00 AM
I am not too hard on them. They did cheat but it was in the air, "kinda a hippie code" for guys and girls. They termed it free love. It just that I did not abide by that code myself.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/25/2023 6:54:00 AM
Thank you, my good friend. Your comments are always appreciated and quite enlightening. I was indeed a very young man then. And suffered several loving relationships that did not work out. Seems the girls did not know what being faithful was! I took after my much beloved father, honorable and faithful was taught me as a child. God bless.
Date: 8/25/2023 4:28:00 AM
Note- Well my friends, I was 23 years old when this holiday picnic occurred and yes four of my ex-girlfriends showed up at that picnic celebration in the park. My wife did not say a word to me, she just gave me that stare! Trust me I did not invite them. But my older brother did as a joke. Yes, he and I had our words later, and my language wasn't nice to him. He thought it was a very good joke!
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