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When Your Yellow Meets My Blue

An unending glow wraps the harvest moon Her pull drags me near but I am still too far Too far for her to hear my cries of joy As I bask in her beauty Too far to look into these hopeless eyes Seeing my forgiving care Forging into me to carry on In a world that is unfair But fairness isn't guaranteed The righteous aren't always rewarded And tomorrow isn't promised As my thoughts dip into her goodness As my lips mouth along to the song of her soul I know all is well And I know all will be well When your yellow meets my blue

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Date: 11/2/2016 2:02:00 PM
I love this poem Tim. Thank you for commenting on my I Live poem. Great, Marilyn
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Date: 10/27/2016 4:10:00 AM
Interesting concept, your title drew me in. A different kind of love story. Unique read.
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Date: 10/25/2016 1:53:00 PM
Does that make purple? Whichever, it will be a beautiful hue, mixed with you.
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Date: 10/23/2016 2:58:00 PM
Another nice write!
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Date: 10/23/2016 1:33:00 AM
Nice one Tim......Seren
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Date: 10/22/2016 9:01:00 PM
ahh, this reminds me of that personality test in which there are the four color personalities. MIne is white/yellow. I see you as a blue for sure and a really fun lady somewhere out there could be your yellow lady! I really enjoyed this,TIm.
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Date: 10/22/2016 4:57:00 PM
You have a beautiful way of mixing, colors and emotions. smooth read.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/22/2016 5:26:00 PM
Thank you Cas.
Date: 10/22/2016 4:56:00 PM
Beautiful..Packed with sentiments..and lovely visuals...Favouring this gem.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/22/2016 5:26:00 PM
Thanks Charma : )

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