When Your Tongue Turned Wild

Like a whip-sword with a blade, it looked humble and curled.
I thought it's the softest pink sapphire in the world.
In your brawl with me, for causeless cause, when you swore
Endless embers of volcanoes gushed from your core.

Your pessimism, like toxin-puffed balloons, soared high
A pain from within me throbbed into a sigh
Scorn, like fire from fighting swords, from you blazed forth
Is there, deep within you, an inferno of wrath?

Did I, in the past, shun showing you my favour?
I, now, feel ashamed to have you as my neighbour.
I thought you're precious and preserved you as a pearl.
What tempest, I don't know, turned you a pool of whirl.

Though storms taunt time and again, do Banyan trees weep?
With your thorny, rude words, I feel awake from sleep.
No one can make rules for me to live with a snake.
What use is a neighbour who gives nothing but ache?

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Date: 12/16/2024 6:19:00 AM
Powerfully penned Christuraj! Having such a toxic neighbour is a menace, and I can feel your plight. Well deserved. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/29/2024 2:15:00 AM
Christuraj, I'm reading this and wondering what caused the volcanic eruption? However, it is amazing that certain things can trigger and episode like this. Not pleasant when it happens and your poem shows the pain such an outburst can cause. I have experienced such as you say and empathize. Very hard to reason with raw lava flowing in your direction.
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Date: 11/26/2024 6:27:00 PM
"Your pessimism, like toxin-puffed balloons, soared high" I like this line, Christina. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/26/2024 6:31:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/25/2024 9:07:00 PM
Congratulations dear Chris on your well deserved win. It is such a menace to have a neighbor like him. "What use is a neighbour who gives nothing but ache?" Quite a relevant question. Powerfully penned.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/25/2024 11:27:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/25/2024 5:55:00 PM
Christuraj your poem expresses with skill a challenging neighbor! Wow! Your pen is mighty in exposing this person and your plight! Congratulations on your placement in my contest! Thank you for entering!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/25/2024 6:28:00 PM
Thank you very much for giving me an opportunity. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/21/2024 8:33:00 AM
Hi Christuraj, have you met my next door neighbour lol.xx
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Date: 11/21/2024 6:10:00 PM
Thank you. May God Bless You!
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