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When Your Eyes Meet Mine

I often wonder ~ ~ What would you think if only you knew my heart flutters at the thought of kissing you. I get lost in wishful reveries of what could be until I come to grips with the sad reality ~ ~ You have never looked at me as anything more than a friend. I don't think you ever notice little things, like how often I quickly look away when your eyes meet mine ~ ~ or the blush that colors my cheeks each time you come near. When you smile, shadows seem to disappear I hear your laughter and begin to shiver ~ ~ knowing I would quiver at your slightest touch. A sigh escapes my lips at the thought of it. I long to have you whisper in my ear endearing words uttered in passion's breath. Those I often dream of hearing ~ ~ Intimate things, spoken in throes of love. If wishes could quench my thirst for you I would be eternally drunk on requests. My hunger well-sated by ardent feasting upon a banquet of untethered desires. If only you knew how much I want you, would it cause you fear and grief? Or is there a chance you'd be relieved that I was the one who opened that door? If you looked deeply into my eyes and neither of us turned away ~ ~ would you see my fear in confessing my love and would you wipe away my tears? Still I wonder ~ ~ What would you do, if only I would tell you What would you say, if only you knew ~ ~ October 25, 2020 ~ If Only You Knew ~ ~ Sponsor: Silent One ~

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Date: 10/27/2020 1:43:00 PM
This is such a heartfelt poem, Jenna. It sounds too real to be fiction, but we'll take your word for it :) Congratulations on a truly deserved win. Regards // paul
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/3/2020 12:04:00 PM
Perhaps it was true long ago, Paul...but sometimes what we want is not what we need. Thanks for your congrats.
Date: 10/27/2020 8:45:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/3/2020 12:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise.
Date: 10/26/2020 8:47:00 PM
Congratulations, Jenna , on your win! Hugs Eve
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/3/2020 12:03:00 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 10/26/2020 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jenna with this steamy poem!! Great job indeed!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/3/2020 12:02:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Mark.
Date: 10/26/2020 10:42:00 AM
Hi Jenna, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/3/2020 12:02:00 PM
I'm delighted to see you back, Alexis, and thanks.
Date: 10/26/2020 9:18:00 AM
I think many people will relate to this.. Sometimes I think back about certain girls and at the time i didnt notice, but then think... Oh yeah... and i wonder about the one who got away... Congratulations on your placement..
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/3/2020 12:01:00 PM
Thank you for the honor.
Date: 10/25/2020 3:00:00 PM
Jenna, Felt this poem all the way to the marrow. -Richard
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/3/2020 12:01:00 PM
Thank you, Richard.
Date: 10/25/2020 12:43:00 PM
Such a sweet, sad poem - good luck in the contest, who knows maybe you whisper his name in your sleep, maybe dreams will waver his way and maybe he will then dream of you. I hope so my friend but I presume this is just for the contest? Excellent poetry. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/25/2020 2:29:00 PM
Not to worry that I'm starved for love, Jennifer. It IS just a contest write. Thank you for good thoughts and hugs.
Date: 10/25/2020 10:33:00 AM
- So sad you could not send him these words ... beautifully described by emotions, Jenna :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 8:46:00 AM
:)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/25/2020 2:27:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise. Thanks, but there is no 'him' in my life. It's just a fictional write.
Date: 10/25/2020 9:16:00 AM
A sad situation to be in, one in love and the other totally unawarel of your feelings. You captured the one side of that situation so well in your verse Jenna. Good luck in SO's contest. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/25/2020 9:47:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. Your comments are always so supportive of my poetry.
Date: 10/25/2020 6:51:00 AM
Absolutely and bewitchingly amazing!
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Date: 10/26/2020 8:43:00 PM
Back again ... the win was a forgone conclusion! Congrats! :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/25/2020 9:47:00 AM
Thank you very much for your wonderfully encouraging remarks, Seeker.
Date: 10/25/2020 6:02:00 AM
WoW! Jenna, You’ve penned such a heartfelt and well written piece. I felt the anguish of the woman in your write.You expressed loving someone, and not knowing how they feel perfectly. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/25/2020 9:46:00 AM
Thank you very much for the kind comments you've written on my lines, Alexis.

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