When Your Eyes Meet Mine

I often wonder ~ ~ 

What would you think if only you knew
my heart flutters at the thought of kissing you.

I get lost in wishful reveries of what could be 
until I come to grips with the sad reality ~ ~ 
You have never looked at me
as anything more than a friend.

I don't think you ever notice little things, 
like how often I quickly look away 
when your eyes meet mine ~ ~ 
or the blush that colors my cheeks
each time you come near.

When you smile, shadows seem to disappear
I hear your laughter and begin to shiver ~ ~ 
knowing I would quiver at your slightest touch.
A sigh escapes my lips at the thought of it.

I long to have you whisper in my ear 
endearing words uttered in passion's breath.
Those I often dream of hearing ~ ~ 
Intimate things, spoken in throes of love.

If wishes could quench my thirst for you
I would be eternally drunk on requests.
My hunger well-sated by ardent feasting 
upon a banquet of untethered desires.

If only you knew how much I want you,
would it cause you fear and grief?
Or is there a chance you'd be relieved
that I was the one who opened that door?

If you looked deeply into my eyes 
and neither of us turned away ~ ~ 
would you see my fear in confessing my love
and would you wipe away my tears? 

      Still I wonder ~ ~ 

What would you do, if only I would tell you
What would you say,  if only you knew ~ ~ 



October 25, 2020  ~ 
If Only You Knew ~ ~
Sponsor: Silent One ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Callus Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 1:43 PM
This is such a heartfelt poem, Jenna. It sounds too real to be fiction, but we'll take your word for it :) Congratulations on a truly deserved win. Regards // paul
Logan Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:04 PM
Perhaps it was true long ago, Paul...but sometimes what we want is not what we need. Thanks for your congrats.
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 8:45 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise.
Roper Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 8:47 PM
Congratulations, Jenna , on your win! Hugs Eve
Logan Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Koplin Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 5:22 PM
Congratulations on your win Jenna with this steamy poem!! Great job indeed!
Logan Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:02 PM
Thanks a lot, Mark.
Y. Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 10:42 AM
Hi Jenna, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Logan Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:02 PM
I'm delighted to see you back, Alexis, and thanks.
One Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 9:18 AM
I think many people will relate to this.. Sometimes I think back about certain girls and at the time i didnt notice, but then think... Oh yeah... and i wonder about the one who got away... Congratulations on your placement..
Logan Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:01 PM
Thank you for the honor.
Theraven Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 3:00 PM
Jenna, Felt this poem all the way to the marrow. -Richard
Logan Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 12:01 PM
Thank you, Richard.
Proxenos Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 12:43 PM
Such a sweet, sad poem - good luck in the contest, who knows maybe you whisper his name in your sleep, maybe dreams will waver his way and maybe he will then dream of you. I hope so my friend but I presume this is just for the contest? Excellent poetry. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Logan Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 2:29 PM
Not to worry that I'm starved for love, Jennifer. It IS just a contest write. Thank you for good thoughts and hugs.
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 10:33 AM
- So sad you could not send him these words ... beautifully described by emotions, Jenna :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 8:46 AM
:)
Logan Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 2:27 PM
Hi Anne-Lise. Thanks, but there is no 'him' in my life. It's just a fictional write.
Cunningham Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 9:16 AM
A sad situation to be in, one in love and the other totally unawarel of your feelings. You captured the one side of that situation so well in your verse Jenna. Good luck in SO's contest. Tom
Logan Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 9:47 AM
Thanks, Tom. Your comments are always so supportive of my poetry.
Seeker Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 6:51 AM
Absolutely and bewitchingly amazing!
Seeker Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 8:43 PM
Back again ... the win was a forgone conclusion! Congrats! :)
Logan Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 9:47 AM
Thank you very much for your wonderfully encouraging remarks, Seeker.
Y. Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 6:02 AM
WoW! Jenna, You’ve penned such a heartfelt and well written piece. I felt the anguish of the woman in your write.You expressed loving someone, and not knowing how they feel perfectly. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Logan Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 9:46 AM
Thank you very much for the kind comments you've written on my lines, Alexis.
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