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Anitha Jayasankar

When Your Eyes Locked Mine

your intense gaze gave me jitters... 
churning the calm ocean of my mind


Date: 05/02/2021
Submitted for: "The Way You Look At Me" Poetry Contest
Sponsor: JCB Brul

Copyright © Anitha Jayasankar | Year Posted 2021

loveromantic lovemonoku

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May 13, 2021 at 2:49 PM

Ahh!! Romantic line. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go for the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Malabika Ray Choudhury

May 5, 2021 at 2:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Anitha. How romantic monoku, Dear Friend! The word "churning" is so meaningful and deep - brilliant! Love ~ Mala

Regina Mcintosh

May 5, 2021 at 7:08 AM

Lovely write. God bless you always, Love, Gina

May 4, 2021 at 8:27 PM

Anitha, Windows to the soul, one will blink, both will know. -Richard

May 4, 2021 at 7:38 AM

good one, Anitha ~

May 4, 2021 at 3:08 AM

WoW!Anitha, You said so much in a few words with this romantic one-liner. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis

May 4, 2021 at 3:02 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. It's my prayer that you're doing well... God bless you.

May 3, 2021 at 11:50 PM

Nicely done dear Anitha...much love :)

Christuraj Alex

May 3, 2021 at 11:25 PM

Congratulations!

May 3, 2021 at 4:03 PM

The churn is better than the burn! Nicely expresses, Ani! :) gw

Andrea Dietrich

May 3, 2021 at 2:50 PM

love when that happens. Very nice, Anitha!

Regina Mcintosh

May 2, 2021 at 12:05 PM

Wonderful words. Love it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Victor Buhagiar

May 2, 2021 at 6:37 AM

Now ain't that sweet :)

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