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When Your Eyes Locked Mine

your intense gaze gave me jitters... churning the calm ocean of my mind Date: 05/02/2021 Submitted for: "The Way You Look At Me" Poetry Contest Sponsor: JCB Brul

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2021 2:49:00 PM

Ahh!! Romantic line. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go for the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/5/2021 2:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Anitha. How romantic monoku, Dear Friend! The word "churning" is so meaningful and deep - brilliant! Love ~ Mala

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/5/2021 7:08:00 AM

Lovely write. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/4/2021 8:27:00 PM

Anitha, Windows to the soul, one will blink, both will know. -Richard

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/4/2021 7:38:00 AM

good one, Anitha ~

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/4/2021 3:08:00 AM

WoW!Anitha, You said so much in a few words with this romantic one-liner. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/4/2021 3:02:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. It's my prayer that you're doing well... God bless you.

Carol Mitra

Date: 5/3/2021 11:50:00 PM

Nicely done dear Anitha...much love :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/3/2021 11:25:00 PM

Congratulations!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/3/2021 4:03:00 PM

The churn is better than the burn! Nicely expresses, Ani! :) gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2021 2:50:00 PM

love when that happens. Very nice, Anitha!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/2/2021 12:05:00 PM

Wonderful words. Love it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/2/2021 6:37:00 AM

Now ain't that sweet :)