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When Your Body Tingled

When your body tingled, in concert with your mind goosebumps flowing up and down your spine Electricity surging through you to fingertips intertwined two by two When you seized your partner's head locked into kisses, 'twould never end And lighter than air your feet swept along to the melody of a distant song ... You never pictured the finish line ~ standing next to Father Time

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/14/2023 1:57:00 PM

The finish line of love not the beginning but the end…

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/14/2023 6:55:00 AM

All good things come to an end, is that it? Nicely done! :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/14/2023 8:15:00 PM

At least some get to end. Others just vanish into thin air...

John Lawless

Date: 6/14/2023 5:52:00 AM

AH, the thrill of the chase becomes the bane of the chaste

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/14/2023 8:15:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha! Thanks for the laughs, John! ~ Chaste-Titty

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 6/13/2023 8:07:00 PM

At first I thought you had pins and needles then your lovely poem gave me goosebumps, Silly Goose nee Old Duck.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2023 8:22:00 PM

See, S.G., there's life in you yet!! Remember the days of love, and come alive! (Like I did writing this)... Highly recommended: 'Let us Lie on Summer Grass,' a pic-poem combo posted today by Panagiota Romios. It was the inspiration for my poem. Hers is a ton better too! Cheers, Gershon