When Young Men Die

When young men meet with
inexplicably sudden and biting ends,
     not the whitewashed passing of those long in the tooth,
     the silver-maned for whom all mourning may expire at death;
that burrowed-under-the-skin ache
where labored breath takes speechless flight
and bids farewell to carefree thought -
that a God of love
carries my heavy heart
seems inadequate in its wake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mohammed Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 6:29 PM
Your very moving and heartfelt write has touched the inside of my soul...I have no words... 'Be strengthened in the Lord' Chuck...Love Diana
Novotny Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 12:04 AM
Thank you. I am strong enough in my love of God that I can dump my anguish on Him, knowing it's ok by Him. - Chuck
Rhinem Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 2:06 PM
Smile ˜ "Fear Not They Whom Allowed May Destroy Merely The Flesh, Yet Rather, HE, Whom Can Destroy Both Body & The Eternal Soul." ˜ Smile, Well, At Least In A Certain & Figurative Sense ˜ The Eyes That See, Are Truly Blessed Indeed * Love Always, John!:) ˜
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April 18, 2012 at 12:17 AM
Great words of encouragement. Thank you. I've no doubt that God is my ultimate ock. I just get cross with Him at times. He's ok with that. - Chuck
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