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When You Died

When you died  I couldn't write a poem. I felt too deeply, or I didn't feel enough. Or maybe I died too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 8/14/2015 4:06:00 PM
I love this one, Mary. A very well crafted tanka. I want to find your Dr. Seuss one that you said had the same theme as mine. I will look a bit and see if I can find it.
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Mary Oliver Rotman
Date: 8/14/2015 5:59:00 PM
YOU wrote it!