When You Close Your Eyes

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When You Close Your Eyes

Clasps of crusty sand paper eyes unlocks a world of darkness. 
The black infinity allows for painter fairies to tiptoe out of solitude,
Swirling and dancing until their freedom seemingly runs scarce. 
Taps of a jewel-encrusted wand flood the gateway opening, 
And a vision of the unknown imagination takes shape. 
The spectrum of color expands into the unforeseen,
And vibrant specks glimmer through pin pricked holes.
Lo & behold does connecting the dots reveal an image of truth, 
Deep seeded ambitions lie intertwined with a painter fairies’ mind. 
So, allow for your weary eyes to rest,
And let the secrets hidden beneath erupt beyond the darkness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 10/19/2017 11:06:00 AM
All comments appreciated!
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Date: 6/22/2017 4:47:00 AM
Wow!! A brilliant metaphysical piece!!! Sometimes I imagine how it is like when we open doors to the next state of consciousness.... Congrats Keely, for having your work featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 6/1/2017 6:48:00 PM
Very imaginative writing of what is seen when you close your eyes. Welcome to PS.
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Date: 6/1/2017 1:45:00 AM
Wonderful painting with images here. I so recognize the Crusty Sand Paper :) Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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