When You Arrive

When you arrive,
I will be there to meet you, Love.
bouquet in hand -
violet blooms to match 
your blue eyes' sparkle.
And you will be there with a gift for me -
the smile in your sweet eyes.


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Used Link #2 https://www.pinterest.com/pin/578431145904762475/
July 25, 2022 for the Short Verse Inspired By Pictures Poetry Contest
Sponsor : Lisa YY

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Christuraj Alex

August 10, 2022 at 4:21 AM

"the smile in your sweet eyes" - A great gift that is. Beautiful. Congratulations!

JC Brul

August 4, 2022 at 10:25 AM

Very sweet!! What could be more precious than a smiling eyes from loved one you've been waiting? Best wishes in the contest! More power on your mighty pen.^_^ JCB

Howard Kerr

August 2, 2022 at 4:15 PM

Hello Andrea, This is a lovely haunting piece that creates a vivid image. Congratulations on your podium placement with the majestic “meandering.” Superbly executed. Genuine thanks for reading, considering and of course your feedback on “Echoes Of A Shady Past.” I appreciate that. Howard

Jennifer Proxenos

July 30, 2022 at 5:47 AM

A lovely meeting of two people in love whether in this lifetime or the next. Either way so different, i have made it a fave. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER

Valsa George

July 26, 2022 at 9:39 PM

Very apt for the image ! I see the lover meeting his beloved with violet blooms in hand. All the Best Andrea !

Vladislav Raven

July 26, 2022 at 12:54 PM

Hi Andrea, love the romance, well it is me. A beautiful song to sing into the heart. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Sara Kendrick

July 26, 2022 at 12:51 PM

Ahh!! I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I like the use of violets in comparing to the color of a person's eyes. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara