When You Arrive

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When you arrive, I will be there to meet you, Love. bouquet in hand - violet blooms to match your blue eyes' sparkle. And you will be there with a gift for me - the smile in your sweet eyes. 38 words checked by WordCounter Used Link #2 https://www.pinterest.com/pin/578431145904762475/ July 25, 2022 for the Short Verse Inspired By Pictures Poetry Contest Sponsor : Lisa YY

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/10/2022 4:21:00 AM

"the smile in your sweet eyes" - A great gift that is. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Jcb Brul

Date: 8/4/2022 10:25:00 AM

Very sweet!! What could be more precious than a smiling eyes from loved one you've been waiting? Best wishes in the contest! More power on your mighty pen.^_^ JCB

Howard Kerr

Date: 8/2/2022 4:15:00 PM

Hello Andrea, This is a lovely haunting piece that creates a vivid image. Congratulations on your podium placement with the majestic “meandering.” Superbly executed. Genuine thanks for reading, considering and of course your feedback on “Echoes Of A Shady Past.” I appreciate that. Howard

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/30/2022 5:47:00 AM

A lovely meeting of two people in love whether in this lifetime or the next. Either way so different, i have made it a fave. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER

Valsa George

Date: 7/26/2022 9:39:00 PM

Very apt for the image ! I see the lover meeting his beloved with violet blooms in hand. All the Best Andrea !

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/26/2022 12:54:00 PM

Hi Andrea, love the romance, well it is me. A beautiful song to sing into the heart. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2022 12:51:00 PM

Ahh!! I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I like the use of violets in comparing to the color of a person's eyes. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara